Swift's story

Swift's story

I got bored so i decided to make this story. Basically, this is Swift's backstory, so... yea... Enjoy! :D

published on May 17, 2014not completed

How it all began...

How it all began... (Swift's P.O.V.) (note: Swift is 6 yrs old in this chapter)

I was walking around Space Colony Ark, playing hide-and-seek with my brother (Shadow) And Maria, Well turns out i'm the one seeking.
I looked in every room top to bottom, bottom to top, upside down, right side up, but i still couldn't find them, so i decided to go back to the base to see if they were already there. As i walked back to the base, something caught my eye. It was big... and blue... and green... it was shaped like a ball, and had wispy white stuff on it. I couldn't figure out what it was. 'I wonder what that's called?' i thought to myself, all the way back to the base i tried figuring out what the weird blue, green, and white ball was. 'What could it be?' i kept thinking to myself.
Finally i reached the base to find nobody at it. Now i was getting kind of scared. 'Wheres my brother?' I thought questioning myself,'I've never been alone for this long'. Now it was clear to me that something was wrong. All of a sudden i hear gunshots being fired by the north hall. I followed the sound of gunshots feeling scared yet somewhat a little brave. I kept thinking to myself 'Is Shadow the one getting shot or the one firing the shots?'. I reach the north hall and slow down and peer over the wall, only to find Maria on the floor with red stuff on her. Suddenly, Shadow spots me then looks at these... Aliens? I presume. Then Shadow rushes toward me running as fast as he could, and grabbed me by the arm and carried me. As we dashed through the halls, the... Aliens... kept shouting "Halt!", or "Stop!", or if not "Stop! you killed Maria Robotnik! Stop or you we will put you down!", 'wait.. WHAT?!?!?' I thought to myself ' How could he kill Maria?!?!' That thought lingered through my mind the whole time we dashed through the halls. Then we came to a stop and he said "Swift look at me," I looked up only to find some red stuff on him to. before i could ask what that red stuff was he said "Swift stay here and no matter what happens don't move from this spot ok?" I nodded, and then he hugged me and I hugged back. Then he dashed out the room faster than time. A few minutes passed and nothing happened, then out of nowhere i hear an explosion and then everything just went... black...
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NOOOO!! SWIFT!!
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on September 03, 2014
Beyonce's not gonna cheer me up, NOT WHEN I KNOW YOU'RE GONNA F*CKING DIE!
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Welp! Beyonce tried!
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YEAH! XD
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on September 03, 2014
OMG ME TOO!!!!
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on September 03, 2014
I LOVE 5SOS!!
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on September 03, 2014
No, if you wanna cheer me up, you'd have to get some 5SOS (5 Seconds Of Summer)
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on September 03, 2014
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on September 03, 2014
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on September 03, 2014
Hey yo! The story had been updated!
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on September 03, 2014
Hey, Swift! Can I be in your story?
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on July 25, 2014
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on July 25, 2014
*blacked out*
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XD
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on July 14, 2014
*wakes back up* JUST KIDDING!!!
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
Cool!!
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Thank you!
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No Pwoblem ^-^
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
God this was cool!
Are we all getting added or just certain people?
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I'm adding whoever wants to be In it! I don't add whoever I want, they might not want to so yeah... Do you wanna be in it? :)
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Oh, I had an idea. Maybe when Jackie comes in, it could be like, related to Dauntless or something. You know, with Sonic and Camille being Dauntless leaders and Jackie is the Queen of Dauntless.
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on July 02, 2014
Np ;)
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on June 30, 2014
Alright! I'll use that! Thanks!
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on June 30, 2014
I've got a pic on my wall of me in Dauntless with a gun if you wanna use that!
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
I was thinking of doing that! XD
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on June 30, 2014
Sure, yeah, but when I come in, maybe it could be some sort of situation with a bad guy, and I kinda help to stop the bad guy Dauntless style!!!
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Awesome!
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on June 30, 2014
Cool!!!
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Thank you!
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on June 30, 2014
XD I just can't' wait t write to he next part!
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on June 30, 2014
I Know The Both Of Us So Cool!!
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on June 30, 2014
Don't worry! I'll Make the next chapter tommrow! It's just getting so excited, I'm even getting suspense!
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on June 30, 2014
I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :D
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Sure! anything for a sonic fan! ^3^
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on June 04, 2014
Oh my god I love coming home and I can be in your story two
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on June 04, 2014
Le sank chu!
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on June 03, 2014
Love your story Swift!
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on June 03, 2014
Just wait for le next chapter.
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on May 28, 2014
I'm confused
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on May 24, 2014
Don't say it!!!! Just don't say it!!!! I want people guess!!!!!!
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Kk ^.^
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on June 10, 2014
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on May 23, 2014
Hmm..I have a idea why may happen..
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on May 23, 2014
Not quite just wait until the next chapter
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on May 21, 2014
So wait. she's a ROYAL?!?!
I'm confused (no offence)
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on May 21, 2014
Thank you!
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on May 19, 2014
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on May 18, 2014
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on May 18, 2014
Thank you!
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on May 18, 2014
Good Story Swift
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on May 18, 2014