Swift's story

Swift's story

I got bored so i decided to make this story. Basically, this is Swift's backstory, so... yea... Enjoy! :D

published on May 17, 2014not completed

"What The Hell?!?!"

"What The Hell?!?!" (Swift's POV)

I stand there in shock, not knowing what to do next.  I looked through the door's glass again and see Rouge just sitting there. I walk in the room trying to get Rouge's attention. I've made a plan in mind, and it's GOING to work! Rouge looks up and see's me.Her eyes widen, "Swifty!" She says trying to sound believable. "What are you doing here?" "What are YOU doing here?" I question her. She just looks at me and flies away. I'm not gonna let her go this time! "CHAOS SPEAR!" I shout at the top of my lungs.
I hit her hard and she falls to the floor unconscious. I turn to the glass container, and see Shadow still there, like if he was waiting for me. I crouch down next to the glass container, and try to open it. There's so many wires and buttons, "which ones do I press?" I whisper to myself. Then I start pressing some random buttons, like you would do in an video game to win the fight. I finally pressed all the buttons, but non of them opened the glass. I try the wires next, and still nothing.
I lean against the glass in defeat. I look down at Shadow crying. "I-I- I'm sor-r-ry...." I stutter. Then I hear Screams. I get up, wiping the tears from my face. The screams get louder and louder. Next I here gunshots. I take the gun from my boot and ready myself. The gunshots can be heard getting closer. I hide behind the glass conatainer where Shadow is, and just wait. Then the gunshots stopped and I hear a scream. Everything gets quiet for a few minutes, and I sit there worrried yet releived some how. Then I hear the door slam open. I ready myself gripping the gun tighter and tighter with every second passing by. And I here foot steps coming my way. Then I see a pink hedgehog with dark purple fur, in a red and black outfit, with a gun in her hand stand right next to me. She looks down at me, but doesn't shoot, instead she reaches her hand out. "Hi I'm Jackie, Jackie the hedgehog! And you?" She questions me. I take her hand, and get up. "The names Swift, Swift Element." I say dusting myself off. Her eyes widen at my response. "Your the Guardian of Mobious!" She says in a low voice. "Umm... excuse me?" I stand there not knowing what to do. "What's your full name?" She questions. "Umm.... Swift Element The Dark Wolf?" I say confused out of my mind.

(Jackie's POV)
I stand there shocked not knowing what to say! 'She' the Guardian of Mobious!' I think with pure happiness and desperation. I look at her, and I can tell she doesn't know what going on. Then I look behind her to see the faker in his little glass box. I look back at her and say, "Why are you looking for him?" I ask pointing at Shadow. "How do you know I was looking for him?" I stand there shocked. 'She's smarter than she looks' I think. 'She would've just told me why she as looking for him, instead of ask me how I'd know.....' "Queen Camille Told Me" I finally say. She looks at me "Well then, It's personal." She says. I look at her then at shadow. And I walk up to the dash board where all the buttons and wires are. I easily hack into it. "How did you that?" Swift questions. "Let's just say i've been watching him from a far." I respond. I see Swift run to Shadow, and try to grab him, but it was a hologram. "What the hell?!" Swifts says looking at me. I Stand there with a questioned look too. Then the room fills up with gas. We start coughing, and coughing, and coughing. I fall to the ground on my knees, and Swift runs next to me and falls to her knees. "Jackie, whatever *coughs* happens stay *coughs* awake!" She tells me. Then I fall down and black out.

(Swift's POV)
I see Jackie black out. I try shaking her awake, but I fail every time. I start coughing like crazy. I know sooner or later I'm going to black out! I move away from Jackie, to the door, and start punching it. I punch like crazy, so it can be heard. I see Camille, and Sonic appear through the little window on the door. "Stay awake! Hold on! We're busting you out of here! The door won't open!" I hear them say. "SWIFT!!" Sonic calls me. "Try to find something to open the door with!" Camille finishes. I nod, and look around from where I'm standing. I see a crow bar, And i start crawling to it. I'm coughing so much, I fall to the ground. I see the crow bar, And it seems pretty close. I reach for it, but it's out of reach. I try to get it but I failed every time. Now I'm too weak, the coughing is making my stomach sore. I stop reaching for the crow bar and grip my stomach. As I lay there everything gets blurry, and I start seeing doubles. Everything starts getting dark.... and darker... and darker... and darker... until I black out...
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NOOOO!! SWIFT!!
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on September 03, 2014
Beyonce's not gonna cheer me up, NOT WHEN I KNOW YOU'RE GONNA F*CKING DIE!
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Welp! Beyonce tried!
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YEAH! XD
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on September 03, 2014
OMG ME TOO!!!!
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on September 03, 2014
I LOVE 5SOS!!
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on September 03, 2014
No, if you wanna cheer me up, you'd have to get some 5SOS (5 Seconds Of Summer)
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on September 03, 2014
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on September 03, 2014
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on September 03, 2014
Hey yo! The story had been updated!
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on September 03, 2014
Hey, Swift! Can I be in your story?
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on July 25, 2014
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on July 25, 2014
*blacked out*
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XD
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on July 14, 2014
*wakes back up* JUST KIDDING!!!
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
Cool!!
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Thank you!
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No Pwoblem ^-^
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
God this was cool!
Are we all getting added or just certain people?
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I'm adding whoever wants to be In it! I don't add whoever I want, they might not want to so yeah... Do you wanna be in it? :)
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Oh, I had an idea. Maybe when Jackie comes in, it could be like, related to Dauntless or something. You know, with Sonic and Camille being Dauntless leaders and Jackie is the Queen of Dauntless.
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on July 02, 2014
Np ;)
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on June 30, 2014
Alright! I'll use that! Thanks!
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on June 30, 2014
I've got a pic on my wall of me in Dauntless with a gun if you wanna use that!
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
I was thinking of doing that! XD
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on June 30, 2014
Sure, yeah, but when I come in, maybe it could be some sort of situation with a bad guy, and I kinda help to stop the bad guy Dauntless style!!!
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Awesome!
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on June 30, 2014
Cool!!!
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Thank you!
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on June 30, 2014
XD I just can't' wait t write to he next part!
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on June 30, 2014
I Know The Both Of Us So Cool!!
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on June 30, 2014
Don't worry! I'll Make the next chapter tommrow! It's just getting so excited, I'm even getting suspense!
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on June 30, 2014
I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :D
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Sure! anything for a sonic fan! ^3^
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on June 04, 2014
Oh my god I love coming home and I can be in your story two
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on June 04, 2014
Le sank chu!
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on June 03, 2014
Love your story Swift!
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on June 03, 2014
Just wait for le next chapter.
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on May 28, 2014
I'm confused
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on May 24, 2014
Don't say it!!!! Just don't say it!!!! I want people guess!!!!!!
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Kk ^.^
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on June 10, 2014
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on May 23, 2014
Hmm..I have a idea why may happen..
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on May 23, 2014
Not quite just wait until the next chapter
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on May 21, 2014
So wait. she's a ROYAL?!?!
I'm confused (no offence)
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on May 21, 2014
Thank you!
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on May 19, 2014
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on May 18, 2014
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on May 18, 2014
Thank you!
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on May 18, 2014
Good Story Swift
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on May 18, 2014