Would you come after me if I walk away?

Would you come after me if I walk away?

Lilith was a Normal girl, being shy she only had one friend. But weirdly one day she walked away. In this story, you will learn the importance of friendship. And to always "keep your old friends one is silver the other gold.

published on September 09, 2016not completed

Walking away

I had a feeling this morning, like I was going to do something bad. But ignoring it I continued my day. The Royal sound of the bell rung in my ears. "Ok class go and get your lunch" I jumped and ran to the door. I ate as fast as I could to meet up with Ariana. But she was in a big group of friends. I looked at her, and turned away walking towards class again. She already had friends, how foolish I was. I kept on walking my back turned and face looking at the ground. Why? Thoughts spun in my head. I was broken inside I felt completely alone.
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I really like your writing style. Keep up the good work! The only thing you could perhaps do is writing the chapters a bit longer. But except that, it is nicely written and you can describe feelings very well. :)
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Thanks for the feed back, and this story is supposed to have short chapters but I will keep that in mind
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Also thanks for reading and commenting @erudite_nessie
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on September 10, 2016
Okay :)
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on September 10, 2016
At least I have one reader
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