Vanished for Torture

Vanished for Torture

Welcome to a world far beyond the one we know. Once you pass through these doors, there is no hope for you. Those who enter, never leave. Welcome, to Warehouse #666, where the innocent children of the world are held prisoners, tortured, even murdered.

published on September 20, 2016not completed

Chapter 1 - Cressida

The Autumn sunset was a beautiful sight. One that young Cressida always enjoyed. She mostly found it inspirational, for art, but first as a photo. Cressida was studying Fine Art and Photography at her school, Bearon Academy. It was a school for those with a keen eye for masterpieces of the artistic world, in which Cressida was considered an honour student. Her work was what represented the Academy at its finest. There is no way she could let the school down, as they depended partly on her artistic instinct. Yes, Cressida also represents the school in national competitions, along with a few other students. It was very rarely Bearon Academy did not place first.
Cressida opened her handbag, pulling out her camera. But where best to take the shot? She needed it so the sky looked magnificent in all its shining glory, brighter than even the Northern Lights. And then she thought of it. Across the road was a good place to start. She looked both ways for any oncoming cars - which none were coming - and crossed the road. Through the camera lens, the sky was even more majestic. The rays of the setting sun coloured the clouds in working shades of red, orange, and pink. It was beautiful to witness.
That is, until the bushes started rattling. Cressida's attention was driven away from her desired picture, towards the bushes. 'This can't be right,' she thought. 'There's nobody else here but me... Right?'
On the other side of the bush, a strange vehicle was parked. A small, white van was waiting at the side of the road. What for, Cressida didn't know, but the man in the driver's seat was growing impatient. That was as much as she could tell. The rest, to her, was unknown. She couldn't help but wonder why they were even there. Were they looking for something?
As she started to raise her camera to take a picture for the police, a hand grabbed her by her neck from behind.
"And what are you doing here, sweetheart?" a man's voice called to her. Cressida quickly pivoted on her heels, but she couldn't see who had spoken to her.
Because now, a hand was covering her eyes and nose, a tissue being placed at her nostrils. There was some sort of chemical on the tissue as well. Cressida wasn't studying in Chemistry, but she could still identify what was used.
Chloroform.
The smell was unbelievably strong, enough for Cressida to pass out, as she fell to her knees. She couldn't hear or see anything around her. She couldn't even feel the men dragging her away by her feet.

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When Cressida finally awoke, the air was cold.
A dark atmosphere engulfed the room, as barely anything could be seen. Cressida was barely able to see the walls of rock, and...
Prison bars?
Others were heard around her, whimpering, whispering, scared for their lives. The negative atmosphere had successfully affected them.
But one question still remained - where exactly was this place? Cressida was among people around her age. Innocent school children, scared that they could die.
A door soon opened, a woman walking inside. She looked proud in her figure, looking down at those within the bars. But her facial expression showed no remorse for these children. If anything, she looked satisfied to see the fear in them.
"Welcome," the woman finally spoke, "to Warehouse #666. Innocent children such as yourselves have sat where you are now. Some of them still reside in this Warehouse, in the Main Cell."
Main cell?
"You will be joining the other Captives in be Main Cell soon enough. First, you must endure your own initiation."
Captives? Initiation? Nothing made sense to Cressida. It was clear that nothing made sense to the others, either. They kept looking at each other in question.
"Before I leave," the woman once again spoke, "let me introduce myself. I am Alice, the Leader of the people who work here. My word is law in these walls, and I am the God here. I can easily end your life if you disobey any rules given. Is that clear?"
"Yes, Ma'am," the children spoke in unison. Alice smirked, walking back out. The gate locked behind her, and all Cressida could do was worry about her initiation.
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on April 01, 2017
Cliffhanger?
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The end of the new chapter.
AKA I will start writing the new chapter tomorrow if this gets the five likes needed.
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on April 01, 2017
AWESOME CHAPTER THERE
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on April 01, 2017
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on March 31, 2017
Are you planning on continuing this?
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on March 30, 2017
UPDATE SOON
PLEASE
ITS LITTERALLY GIVING ME TERRIFIED YOU ARENT UPDATING THIS FASTER
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*GETTING
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on March 15, 2017
Is there going to be an update soon? This is a good story, actually.
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There is a chapter currently in development, but I have to hold all story progress for now.
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:3 I'm looking forward to it. Don't worry, I can be patient! XD
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on March 15, 2017
Well trust me, the waiting will be worth it :)
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on March 15, 2017
Oh, no, no! *waves hands frantically* I didn't mean to shame you! I understand people have stuff going on, and they have lives outside of their stories. It's cool, it really is! I'm just saying I'm gonna be hyped when you do update again, when you have time.
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on March 15, 2017
I know, and I'm really sorry to put you down.
It's just that I've been selected at random for a remark in one of my college subjects, so that now has to be my top priority.
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on March 15, 2017
Oh, alright! That's cool, I'm just excited~
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on March 15, 2017
It would be great for you too update
Sorrt if I seem impaitent. Just am.
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Yo :)
Sorry that this hasn't been updated in a while.
The next chapter is in development, I promise.
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on February 25, 2017
Currious, whens the next update going to be possibly?
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on February 14, 2017
OMG. PLZ UPDATE I NEED MORE
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on October 21, 2016
I think I've read this before...and you finally updated it!!! Yay! :D
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on October 21, 2016
You, my friend, need to update.
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on October 18, 2016
Told you your story is better ;o
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And yet yours has more chapters and is more popular than mine by almost 100 reads.
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WEEEEL TO BAD XD
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on October 14, 2016
XD Matilda's father would punish you for being that.
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on October 14, 2016
Yes, but yours is more detailed, decide the reads by the number of chapters and you have more.
(I'm a smart alik x3)
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on October 14, 2016
Who is the other protagonist besides Ari and Cressida?
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on October 01, 2016
Poor Ari...
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In my opinion, she has it better than the other two...
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Holy shit.
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on September 27, 2016
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on September 27, 2016
*claps* this should be made into a Movie someday..
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Of course! I wouldn't have said that if I didn't mean it..
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on September 21, 2016
A.... movie?
You really think so?
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on September 20, 2016
This is pretty cool, and using Qfeasters' characters was a pretty good idea!! ^^
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:D thank you so much!
I wanted to involve others in this, so I felt this was a good idea, and it drives me out my comfort zone in terms of what I write.
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Thank you! This means, so much to me! I don't plan on failing anybody with this story!
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on September 21, 2016
That's amazing. Writing out of your comfort zone makes you an even better author. And I absolutely love the idea of involving others. Great job so far!!
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on September 20, 2016
Clorophorm doesn't have a smell.
Other than that, I enjoy it.
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Oh... I always thought it did, otherwise how would it knock people unconscious?
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Nope. Chemicals.
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on September 20, 2016
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on September 20, 2016
*reads first chapter*
"Warning: if a character does don't go blaming it on me"
Me: Oooh nice!
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on September 20, 2016