Nightmare in Mobius

Nightmare in Mobius

This story is based of the epic film series "Nightmare on Elm Street". Yep, we're talking Freddie Cruger!

published on June 21, 2014not completed

The Rhyme...

*This first chapter is told in third person, the rest are in someone's point of view.*

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They say a long time ago lived a man named Scourge Cruger. It was rumoured he was a child murderer. But one day, he was never seen again.
Children nowadays learn a rhyme about him while playing, and this is how it goes:

1...2... Scourge's coming for you,
3...4... Better lock your door,
5...6... Grab the crucifix,
7...8... Better stay up late,
9...10... Never sleep again!

Some children, however, believe he is still real. In their dreams. They say when you sleep, he comes for you; he tries to kill you. But they believe those dreams are real, because they are marked with cuts and scratches... of sharp fingernails. Could Scourge Cruger be real???
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Write more!!! Amazing!!!
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on July 05, 2014
Evenstar: We're talking a "Nightmare on Elm Street - Sonic Style"!
Lighting: You should do that!
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on June 24, 2014
Yes! YES YES YES YES YES! Awsome so far!
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OMFG IT TALKS!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!
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DX Meeehhhh! I have to get another 2 chapters to 2 of my stories then I can start it and your story is awsome!
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on June 22, 2014
XD I been bored stiff waiting for you!!!
And a little heads up... you better hurry with the WWFFY series, the story's catching up!!
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on June 22, 2014
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on June 22, 2014
Danm! This is good! Probably held real? O_0
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on June 21, 2014
Scourge cruger?!??
OMG so asome!
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on June 21, 2014