Problems with Mary Sues

Yep. You heard. The dreaded mary- or Gary- sues. However, its not as simple as it seems. Now, this isnt about why everyone hates them. Im going to take trats from the steryotypes and break them down.

published on December 21, 2016not completed

Immortality

HOW IS THIS EVEN A FLAW-

OK SCREW GRAMMAR FOR A MINUTE.

LETS START WITH A LITTLE COMMON KNOWLADGE:
IMMORTALITY IS SEEN DIFFERENTLY FOR EVERYONE.

Ok, back to grammar...

Now, theres a few main different immortalities Im going to generalize into one:

-Common immortalities, lives forever and cannot die

-Slightly common immortalities, where they can live forever, but cannot die certian ways, either has to be natural or inflicted.

-recarnation, such as the Doctor in Doctor Who, or religons stating they restart and change conpletely.

Now, what do we get with any of these? Turn to Greek mythology stories, where anyone whos immortal gets depressed over loosing a mortal or are at eachothers throats and know for a fact they cant kill eachother.

Same with anyone else.

Speaking of tearing eachothers throats..
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Hi here is one thing you MIGHT want to add in this story
and this would be: relationships with canon characters. Simple right?
Well you see, unless you were making some next gen story and needed some ocs for that story or series, the fandom tends to make thier own ocs that they use in universe, to be the sibling, or in a romantic relation ship with the canon See More
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on February 19, 2019
Here's another thing to add in this story:
Their appearances.
Most Mary-Sues tend to be described with flawless looks. Even when they pop out of bed they look perfect.
And wtf is up with the rainbow designs?
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No clue, but its part of the steryotypical apperance of a mary sue.
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And hence why there needs to be a chapter for it.
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on January 10, 2017
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on January 10, 2017
Also.. just reading that immortality bit...
Holy shit, does that mean the Hunters from Percy Jackson are Mary Sue's once they take the oath?!
No wait, they can die... But they're still immortal, CAN THEY EVEN GET SICK?!
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They dont qualify as Mary Sues because they were:
-From Greek mythology technically
-It was given
-Dont posess all the traits.
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on December 24, 2016
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on December 24, 2016
For the tragic past, good job saying some.
I know for a fact that Creepypasta is KNOWN for tragic backstories - even though I'm not into that - but I also know for a fact that tragic backstories are actually okay for OC's in Creepypasta.
In other places, they're looked down upon, even if one canon character had a tragic backstory.
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Usually its depending on, once again, the opinion of the people.
Generally, too tragic is the death of a family member, children, and/or friends. Like having an oc have thier parents die when they were a child, and children die as when theyre an adult. Still, it is pure opinion.
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