Essay i made for my class

Essay the i made for my class just really random it kinda weirda most of them are from 7th and 8th. I suck at writing so enjoy!!

published on November 21, 2020not completed

Kidnaped

yes this really bad so be Prepared for the Cringe


Caroline lay in bed texting her best friend Liam.
“Hey what up ” Caroline texted.
“The moon, wanna hang out ” Liam texted back.
“Sure, but where” Caroline texted.
“The woods ” Liam texted
“Ok,” caroline texted back.
And with that, she grabs a coat and grabs a flashlight. Ran out into the starry night and jogged into the woods. Sees Liam by the enterces of the wood.
        Caroline pov:
*Ninja mode activated.* Sneakily walking up on Liam spooking him.
Jeff the Killer pov:
Watch this a girl and a boy walk through the woods. The girl with long honey-do like hair, and her beautiful shade of blue eyes. She’s wearing a dark blue jacket almost as
dark midnight blue. The boy had short blonde hair with red tips. He has big dark brown eyes.
Caroline pov:
        It was all calm and quiet, but just then the sound of a stick being broken. “W wwho ’s the..r..e?” I stutter. No response came back from my question, then slowly I started to panic. My heartfelt like it exploded. Liam, he ran and left me. I just stand there frozen. Then someone with a white hoodie with their hood on. They were running toward me…… now I was shaking. But then he stops right in front of me, slowly my vision became blurry and my eyelids become heavy.
A few hours later

Caroline pov:
I woke up in a bed that wasn’t mine, not sure of where I was. I heard a door open, see the guy from the woods, but with his hood down. Hh-is fa..c...e, he has carved red smile and what looks to be cut or burnt off eyelids. He carries a tray with food on it. Put it down on a table I didn’t even know was right in front of me.  
He told me, “eat it.”
I said, “no”
He yelled “EAT IT OR ELSE”
I ate it, At that moment was sacred. I didn’t want to die, yet. He left, I got off the bed, look down to see I’m in an oversized white hoodie that’s covered in dried blood. I gotta get out of here. While pacing around, I notice a window. So, I decided to jump out the window,
But when I landed, I hurt my left leg. While I try to limp away I see the white hoodie guy, he jumped and landed on his feet. Just then I trip on nothing, of all the times it’s now. But by some miracle I got away, to see what looks to be human I couldn't tell they had a blue mask with black liquid. He had a black jacket and wearing black skinny jeans. As I was walking closer I saw a scalpel. I turned around and started to limp away. I thought I gotta away, I closed my eyes for a few seconds. I see that masked man again. He picked me up and carried me bridal style back to the white hoodie man.
“JEFF”, yelled the masked man.
Jeff yelled, “back WHAT E.J.”.
The masked man called EJ replied, “I got her.”
A few years later
Caroline pov:
I got to know Jeff and he got to know more about me.
Jeff the Killer pov:
“Yeah, here's a funny moment from a year go, she was in the bathroom brushing her teeth she sees a spider.”, said jeff. “She was AHHHHHHHHHHHHH”, said Jeff
Imitating Caroline.
“Jeff was like EAR RAPPPPE”, said Caroline Imitating Jeff
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on February 01, 2022
Essay number 4: Yikes, bullying.
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on November 30, 2020
What if you revise the essays you wrote and show us a before and after? It'd be so cool!
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I'll try it ( i will do it when im on xmas break) @Suzuki
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i might change the plot line to Kidnapped(i made it last year at last minute) @Suzuki
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on November 28, 2020
Especially "Kidnapped". :P
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