The Story of Ari

The Story of Ari

If You wanna be in this story! I have a character Submission where you can create a character and i'll put it in my story! Ari, 15 year old, Human Animal and maybe is the last of her species..The FBI noticed her and her life has been destructive ever since. Will she be able to escape the Fate that lies ahead of her..

published on June 14, 2017not completed

Kokoro Meets Ari....

Kokoro Meets Ari.... *Kokoro perspective*
As stare into the moon, wondering, thinking.....regretting. I wish i was able to fight with my parents. Able to save them from the death that awaited them. The sad thing is that I couldn't find them. Them as in the murder who killed my parents. I don't remember what they looked like either and thats really annoying. I've trained my butt off for years trying to find and get justice. "I Will Find You" I mumbled looking into the moon.

*Ari perspective*

"I-I Cant do this!!" I thought. "How could it be her....." I tear up. Looking at her reminded me of my mom. It got worse and worse. Reiji didn't understand what to do. "Ari?!" She said with a hint of worry. Leaitha came back with a sad face on. "I couldn't find Jason...." She mumbled and walked over to me. "You Okay?" "N-no..I...I I just uh.." I got up imminently and ran off, crying. Anthia turns towards them smiling, not knowing what just happened. When seeing everyone frown she starts getting worried as well. I ran to a cliff, a cliff i use to calm myself down. Then I see someone standing there. I wanted to spy on them to see what they're doing but instead I stepped on a stick breaking it. "This always happens in movies.." I thought

*Kokoro*
Then I heard a stick snap and turned my heard around slightly, taking my two swords out."Justice" I thought thinking maybe that was the murder. If he or she went after my parents soon they would go after me. I could feel their every move trying to get away, but no. Im not letting them get away this time. I quickly and swiftly dash into the forest not making any sound, following them.

*Ari*
"Ffffffftttthhhhhhh" I said quietly while I ran through the forest, jumping over logs and sliding under things. Trying to get away from the maniac that was chasing me. "Deja Vu.." I thought, remembering what happened on the night I got captured.

*Kokoro*
"Got You" I thought smirking as I quickly flew past them making no sound. Soon Appearing in front of them, glaring them. Realizing my parents murder was a her. "Meet Your Fate" I growled and ran towards her with my swords behind me. "WHY??!?!" She cried and started running. "COME BACK HERE!!" I yelled angrily and charged at her, shoving my swords her in the back. I smirked as she fell to the ground. Then I rolled her over to see those guilty eyes, and put the tip of my sword to her throat.."Any Last words?" I asked. "I have people to live for" She said, but when I tried to press down i couldn't. "What?!?" I thought trying to stab her in the throat. I couldn't move.

*Ari*
I used telekinesis on her, keeping her from killing me."I have People to live For" I said weakly and teleported out of her reach, then fell to the ground, bleeding out. Dying, slowly. Animals started running towards me, and trees bent over covering me. I started crying, knowing this is my end. "What the...." She mumbled. "Who are you?" "I-im Ari.....Experiment 91483....The Daught~" I got out before blacking out.

*Kokoro*
"The Daughter of WHAT!??" I thought angrily. "AND WHY THE HECK ARE THESE ANIMALS AND TREE'S SURROUNDING HER???????" I thought out loud. A Pack of wolves growled at me angrily. "??" Then it occurred to me that she wasn't the murder...but the daughter of nature. "Oh pfft....." I mumbled and ran over to her, dropping my swords and trying to figure out how to heal her. "UmmUmmUmm" I thought and started healing her with my powers. The cuts slowly disappeared but I could tell that her health wasn't good at all. "Crap" I mumbled
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Heh. Anthia still serves as one of my favorite OCs.
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on June 14, 2018
WHY DID LEATHILA GET NO PERSPECTIVE
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on June 05, 2018
O.0 dude Nemisis is a badass!
Poor Yami DX
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on January 05, 2018
*notices there's another chapter* oh. *Reads it* *leaves* no.
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on November 15, 2017
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on November 14, 2017
Awww okay aleast you're making another one :3
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on October 04, 2017
*trying to hold back laughter* u-um... S-sky... I've been watching n-no game n-no l-life and... *Starts laughing* the picture you used for Ari is a character from no game no life!! *Laughing hysterically*
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WOOOO XD
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on September 11, 2017
And holy crap kokoro was actually in this chapter!
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on September 09, 2017
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on September 09, 2017
CURSE YOU ARIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
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on August 18, 2017
*slowly reading all of the chapters over again...* Hmm.... *Trying to think of a theory and a ship* hmm...
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on August 14, 2017
I really hope I'm not the only one still reading this
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your not..i get pms!
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Ok I feel better
But it kinda sucks because my pm doesn't work
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on August 07, 2017
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on August 06, 2017
Omg I need to know what happens next! :0
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ME TOO
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Make more when you can :0
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on August 01, 2017
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on July 24, 2017
And... sky what the heck? MOUTH WASH AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
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on July 24, 2017
Uh ooooooh! Doctor k's gone yandere on us all! Everybody run for your life!!! AAAAHHH!!!!
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on July 24, 2017
Nemesis saved her? :0
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:O
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on July 08, 2017
Umm >_<
Sure I'll start!
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on July 08, 2017
Are you making more chapters?
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on July 08, 2017
You are so very welcome :-D
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on July 08, 2017
He did which I'm very happy that a car didn't hit her :3
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on July 08, 2017
He only saves people who have despair,
You had despair
so he helped you......by a lot
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on July 08, 2017
Omg I'm shocked :0
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on July 08, 2017
Am I correct? :0
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on July 08, 2017
Omg tell me she didn't die :0
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NOT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER
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on July 07, 2017
I love it I can't wait for the third one :D
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on July 07, 2017
Where has Anthia gone? GET THE FRICK FRACK BACK IN THESE WORDS, ANTHIA!
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Do you want her back?
She's a lone wolf right....
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Aaaaah! No, like, lone wolf as in SHE KNOWS HOW TO FEND FOR HERSELF! But she loves to keep with her friends! In case there's an emergency that can be fixed with Wind fern or herbs.
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on July 07, 2017
Omg XD
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:D
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on July 07, 2017
The poison sure has a mind of its own XD
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on July 07, 2017
Love it X3
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:D
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That's basically her reaction XD
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on July 05, 2017
Yea~YEAAAAA
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on July 05, 2017
The reaction of her seeing Needle Shots is amazing you got it correctly
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on July 05, 2017
Omg they came out awesome :O
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on July 05, 2017
0-0...... BADASS!!!!
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No offense to kokoro, but I actually kinda laughed when she got punched in the face XD
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on July 05, 2017
Nishishi~ This is interesting.
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Really :D
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on July 05, 2017
Perhaps kill the most useless character you can think of?
However...
I am a liar after all. Nishishi~
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on July 05, 2017
Maybe...
I can't find a character who's worthy enough to die!
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on July 05, 2017
Indeed. Is there going to be any death in it?
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on July 05, 2017
Love it is Yamilette coming in the story yet? :3
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Yes Im doing that right now!
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on July 05, 2017
Yes, Im working my as off XD
That would make 2 chapters today I think!
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on July 05, 2017
Cool are you gonna post it today?
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on July 05, 2017
Yes!!
I'm planning it out!
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on July 05, 2017
Did you get any ideas?
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on July 05, 2017
Alright hope you get an idea
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on July 05, 2017
Im trying to get an idea see the chapter you just read involves the person who was gonna save you talking to people right now. So I'm trying to get an idea of you saving yourself or someone saving you. Right now I'm brainstorming and drawing because that show I brain storm
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on July 05, 2017
You almost done?
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on July 05, 2017
Nice :0
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what :O
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on July 05, 2017
I'm saying it was amazing also are you making more today?
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on July 05, 2017
0-0 YOU MADE KOKORO BADASS!!!!!!!
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You're welcome :D
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*makes another chapter shipping Yami and Ari*
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on July 04, 2017
BBBYYYEEE
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on July 04, 2017
I'm gonna go read the chapter again see ya! *Walks away*
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on July 04, 2017
XD That would be interesting...
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on July 04, 2017
Ari and Yami?
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on July 04, 2017
*whispers* I swear to god I'm gonna ship you and yamilette someday...
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on July 04, 2017
GOD NO ITS A JOKE!!!!! (+_+). (you have the power to freak me out sky...)
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on July 04, 2017
Im actually starting to think you want me to ship them together :O ;3
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on July 04, 2017
Uh oh... I know that look... 0-0 (sky: starts shipping kokoro and Maine) oh god no!
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on July 04, 2017
Okay, I have another idea :D
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on July 04, 2017
Oh god plz don't I don't wanna be responsible for her death :'( I don't wanna kill the main character
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on July 04, 2017
(XD)
Now lets see if Ari dies
XD Idk I'm actually considering it...
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on July 04, 2017
NOTHING!!!! YOU MADE KOKORO EVEN BETTER!!!! (The power of caps lock XD)
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on July 04, 2017
Whats wrong?
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on July 04, 2017
OH MY GOD!!!!!
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on July 04, 2017
Another tribute to yamilette

Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you
That is how I know you, go on

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on July 04, 2017
Omg poor Yamilette also thats good that the girl remembered Ari is her sister
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Noooooooooooooo yamilette!!!!!!!

Ohh say can you see
By the Dawn's early light
What so proudly we hailed
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Happy 4th of July to you too
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on July 05, 2017
I WILL MAKE MY CHAPTERS
after I eat this cookie :3
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on July 04, 2017
Now YOU GO WRITE THOSE CHAPTERS!!! (I feel like a fan girl... XD)
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on July 04, 2017
HAPPY 4TH JULY ;D
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on July 04, 2017
Happy 4th of July sky and yamilette!
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on July 04, 2017
YES!!!! *Starts singing at the top of lungs* :-D. :-D. :-D :-D:-D
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on July 04, 2017
Wake me up before you gogo.....
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on July 04, 2017
Sorry I get excited.. a little too much... now you write thowe chapters girl! Gogogo
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IM READY TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS >:O
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on July 04, 2017
XD What is this??
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on July 04, 2017
Lol thank you XD
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on July 04, 2017
I didn't want to
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exactly
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on July 04, 2017
True because you put alot of effort in it
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on July 04, 2017
No I wouldn't want to change the whole thing thats stupid...
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on July 04, 2017
That's good aleast you didn't change the chapter
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on July 04, 2017
Oh are they gone now?
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on July 04, 2017
What do you mean?
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on July 04, 2017
So seemingly forny isd blocked my own stories from me so....
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on July 04, 2017
I just noticed you edited the chapter
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on July 04, 2017
Mmhm!
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on July 04, 2017
You make me so hype for this story XD
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on July 04, 2017
You sure are I also wonder who will find Yamilette
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on July 04, 2017
YEA
Im worth something :D
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on July 04, 2017
No you're just gifted with many ideas XD
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on July 04, 2017
xD Im just that weird
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on July 04, 2017
I'm so surprised you can make three chapters in one day
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on July 04, 2017
Omg I knew that wolf guy was gonna come I love the idea that they trap her! XD
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The wolf guy was the only one besides Nemesis I think who could beat your speed
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on July 02, 2017
Of course you make your stories so realistic that you make the characters real and alive X3
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on July 02, 2017
Really? YES!!!!
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on July 02, 2017
I'm not sure but you make everyone in the story just like they should you make them powerful and weak as well it shows alot of character in them
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on July 02, 2017
Although Ik some people who does this, they make their own character the most powerful you know? Like the story creator XD Why am I different??
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on July 02, 2017
I thought that too
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on July 02, 2017
( Admin Post: I forgot to comment whoopsies
I love this story!! Will Nemesis appear again soon? )
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Yes!!! They will appear in random times in the story!!
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( No prob! )
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on July 01, 2017
Thank you for supporting me!!
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on July 01, 2017
( Ah, okay! Thanks for putting them in, by the way! ^^ - Admin )
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on July 01, 2017
Ari found her kind I'm so happy for her!
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Yeeaaa!!!
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on July 01, 2017
Yeah Because she ran off, with no one and thats when Im adding another character into the story..>:)
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on July 01, 2017
Yep I am so hyped to know
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on July 01, 2017
*smirks*
YOU'LL FIND OUT SOON ENOUGH >:*)
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on July 01, 2017
I wonder what the agents will do to Yamilette later on in the story
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Omg best chapters ever yay two in one day
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Yeah XD! I ned to talk to someone before i make the next chapter though!
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:D YEA!
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on June 30, 2017
No problem you're one of my favorite writers on here
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on June 30, 2017
Aww Thank You! I didn't think I was that good of a writer!
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on June 30, 2017
Alright also I love your ideas so much! X3
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