The future of mobius (my character story)

The future of mobius (my character story)

The credit doesn't go to me it goes to lily icicle, I repeat the credit does NOT go to me goes to lily icicle

published on January 28, 2015not completed

The red liquid did this

Once they went back to crystals base Crystal fell to the floor. Everyone panicked (but swift she's the calm one). They didn't know what to do "what do we do, the injection got crystal in hay wire who knows what happens to her!" Sonia said in worry
"We should tie her up" Swift said
"No you can do that I'm not tiring up my best friend!" Sonia said and walked off to find silver. Swift sighed and went to find rope and leaving Yamilette and Lana with passed out Crystal "when do you think she'll wake up?" Lana said breaking the silence
"Honestly no but the injection must be doing something to her like spreading the robot but there has to be something else that the liquid is doing to her" Yamilette answered
"Yea"
Crystal's ear started to twitch and Swift came back with rope "is she waking up?"
"Ummmm I....don't......know" Lana said
Swift sighed and walked to Crystal then reaches to her but Crystal snapped her hand to swift gripping swift's wrist
"oh my gosh!!" Swift said trying to pull away Crystal sat up opened her eyes a bit and the couch froze instantly but not swift and she looked at swift and at the rope. Swift sweatdropped and hid the rope "what were you gonna do to that rope..swift"
"Crystal haha you see this is the reason" swift said nervously pulling slightly on her wrist "let go please"
Crystal growled a bit loosing her grip and swift ripped her wrist out. Then swift noticed crystals eyes were changing colors
"Crystal"
"What" she said standing up
Swifts ears went down "your eyes"
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Oh, I'm such a bad@$$ xD
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on April 02, 2015
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on March 27, 2015
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on March 27, 2015
OMG, CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! ITS AWESOME, GIRL!!!
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Whoa ? thank you!
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on March 15, 2015
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on March 15, 2015
its not cool.......

ITS A-MAZE-ING-LY AWESOME!
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Thank you! Your character is next ?
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on February 22, 2015
Yep maybe tomorrow I'll put the next chapter
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on February 22, 2015
really? wow! can't wait to read the next chapter!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
I love it! :3
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Can you send me a link of her?
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Got it
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Sure!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Thank you!
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Your welcome
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on February 22, 2015
Raven the hedgebat please. Thank you!
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on February 22, 2015
You did? But I did it get it
You know what this is the ONLY time I'm going to do this
What character do you want to put in this?
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on February 22, 2015
Is it too late to ask for one of my characters to be in there? I requested one and it wasn't on the list.
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
The names actually 'Swift Element The Dark HedgeWolf' But close enough!!! Love it! Can't wait for the next chap!!
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Oops sorry and thank you!
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Sure thing! ?
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Last day to get some characters I already have
Octavia the wolf bot
Swift the dark hedgewolf
Lana the wolf
Ruby the hedgebat See More
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Hmmm times up I guess I'll just random pick
Rouge and well blaze is-
Silver: *frown*
Uh- *eyes widen* I'll just put Connor
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on February 09, 2015
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on February 02, 2015
Cool! :D
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Thankz
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
Thankz for catching that I'll change it once the times up
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
Its awesome! But there's a little typo. Celina's full name is Celina Shadows, not Celina The Cat. Sowwy it bugs meh x3
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on January 30, 2015
Ok! You three can be in it I just have think somethin up to squeeze you guys in the story
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on January 29, 2015
Can I be in it? :3 Love it btw!
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on January 28, 2015
Can melody be in it?
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on January 28, 2015
I'll be in it if you want, nice job so far!!!
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on January 28, 2015