The future of mobius (my character story)

The future of mobius (my character story)

The credit doesn't go to me it goes to lily icicle, I repeat the credit does NOT go to me goes to lily icicle

published on January 28, 2015not completed

The first survivor found

'CRASH'
Crystal and Sonia snapped their heads at the Ally way, after a while a female black and red hedgehog fell out of the darkness onto her hands and knees "my goodness are you ok?" Crystal said running to her with Sonia
"I'm fine just a exhausted" the hedgehog said slapping Crystal's hand away
"Then here" holding out a water bottle to her and the female slowly took it and opened. She looked at it
"You didn't do anything to it, right" she said looking at crystal
"Gosh no! Why would I poison a live möbian" Crystal said shocked at the female and she narrowed her eyes at crystal. The female looked at the water for a while then drank it "see? Nothing is happening to you." Crystal said giving her a weak smile
The female rolled her eyes "name"
"Huh?....oh! My name I'm sorry how rude of me. I'm crystal the cat" Crystal said sweat dropped and the female looked at Sonia "My name is Sonia the hedgehog, it's nice to meet you" Sonia said holding out her hand and she looked at her hand then at her "Swift element...the dark hedgehog" the one called 'Swift' said with a blank expression and Sonia slowly put her hand down.
"Crystal."
"Hmmm?"
"What did you need help with?"
"Oh! Yes that.....I'm planning to put together an alliance to go against Eggman" that caught Swifts attention
"An alliance?"
"Yes"
"Against Eggman?"
"Mmmhmmm" Crystal nodded "may you please join. We need all the help we can get"
"We?" Sonia said looking at crystal
"Oh! Silver survived the robot transformation, he's a robot rebel" Crystal said smiling to a frown. This made Sonia upset
"Oh. . ." Sonia said and crystal shook her head
"So are you going to join?" Looked at Swift with her eyes full of hope and Swift crossed her arms and thought for while
"Fine I'll join" she said closing her eyes
"*gasp* my gosh thank you!" Crystal said about to hug her then froze and stepped back blushing and sweat dropped "*fake cough* uhhh I'm sorry"
"Whatever...so do you have a house or no" Swift said rolling her eyes
"yes follow me please." Crystal said stealthing around a corner with Swift and Sonia behind her
--Swift the dark hedgehog isn't my character it's swiftthedarkhedgehog's character--
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Oh, I'm such a bad@$$ xD
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on April 02, 2015
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on March 27, 2015
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on March 27, 2015
OMG, CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! ITS AWESOME, GIRL!!!
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Whoa ? thank you!
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on March 15, 2015
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on March 15, 2015
its not cool.......

ITS A-MAZE-ING-LY AWESOME!
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Thank you! Your character is next ?
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on February 22, 2015
Yep maybe tomorrow I'll put the next chapter
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on February 22, 2015
really? wow! can't wait to read the next chapter!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
I love it! :3
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Can you send me a link of her?
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Got it
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Sure!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Thank you!
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Your welcome
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on February 22, 2015
Raven the hedgebat please. Thank you!
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on February 22, 2015
You did? But I did it get it
You know what this is the ONLY time I'm going to do this
What character do you want to put in this?
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on February 22, 2015
Is it too late to ask for one of my characters to be in there? I requested one and it wasn't on the list.
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
The names actually 'Swift Element The Dark HedgeWolf' But close enough!!! Love it! Can't wait for the next chap!!
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Oops sorry and thank you!
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Sure thing! ?
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Last day to get some characters I already have
Octavia the wolf bot
Swift the dark hedgewolf
Lana the wolf
Ruby the hedgebat See More
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Hmmm times up I guess I'll just random pick
Rouge and well blaze is-
Silver: *frown*
Uh- *eyes widen* I'll just put Connor
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on February 09, 2015
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on February 02, 2015
Cool! :D
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Thankz
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
Thankz for catching that I'll change it once the times up
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
Its awesome! But there's a little typo. Celina's full name is Celina Shadows, not Celina The Cat. Sowwy it bugs meh x3
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on January 30, 2015
Ok! You three can be in it I just have think somethin up to squeeze you guys in the story
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on January 29, 2015
Can I be in it? :3 Love it btw!
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on January 28, 2015
Can melody be in it?
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on January 28, 2015
I'll be in it if you want, nice job so far!!!
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on January 28, 2015