The future of mobius (my character story)

The future of mobius (my character story)

The credit doesn't go to me it goes to lily icicle, I repeat the credit does NOT go to me goes to lily icicle

published on January 28, 2015not completed

The other survivors

--1 month later--
It's been a month and Crystal needed food and water. She quickly but quietly slipped passed robot followers and maybe even taking out a couple. She peeked around the corner and saw a robot follower, a white one but didn't his/her face, it wasn't moving. Crystal slowly slid her small dagger from its case and creeped behind the follower then I spun around. Her heart broke into 6 pieces, each piece equals each year she has been friends...with silver the hedgehog and loved him. He quickly pinned her and covered her mouth "dOnT SCReaM" he said and she nodded. He didn't notice it was her because she had her hood on her head covering her identity. He got off of her and helped her up and said "Hi I'm siLvErr the hEdGEhog"
"I know" she said quit high pitched
He was confused "WHaT?"
She slid off her hood "I think you already know me." She giggled at his face then frowned "Silver." She said sadly touching his quills and felt like metal "look what happened to you"
"AND How ArE yOu FinE?" He said moving her hair out of her left eye and he gasped
"Yea, I know" she said touching her eye which was a pale red eye color and the metal was pale blue, grey and black, by her cheek was just black. "I was saved by someone harshly pushing me into a building which stopped me from becoming a robot and possibly a robot follower" Crystal said and laughed softly, Sliver did too then she noticed some robots "quickly come" she said grabbing Silvers wrist and barely dragged him away from the Ally way then bumped into someone...... A hot pink hedgehog "ahh sorry" and she walked away....."I-I'm crystal" she called out to the hedgehog and she turned around
"I'm Yamilette, Yamilette the hedgehog" and walked away. Crystal and Silver sneaking around trying to find a house or a store that's has been abandon. After a while of looking, they found one and started looting. They didn't know that there were followers in there. Crystal bumped right into one "nice, very smart Crystal" she said to herself as a follower stood over her
"All MObiANs muST Be RObotisiZed" it said as it reached for her but she quickly got her dagger and stabbed it square in the head. Then she heared Silver scream and she ran to him and saw a follower standing over him and silver has lost his lower arm. She......was.......furious she twirled the dagger and said "nobody, and I mean NOBODY hurts MY FRIENDS!!" She charged at the möbian bot and it kicked her. She was more mad by that and she slid under the follower tripping it in the air and she pounded its head in the ground. "Are you alright" she said after she snapped out of attack mode.
"Do I look alright" Silver sasses at her and she gave him the deadly glare, his face: ^_^;. "Heh heh uhhhh I mean not really heh" he said nervously that he was gonna get pounded into a chunk a of metal.
"Let's just get back to my house" she smiled and helped him up and headed to her so-called home.
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Oh, I'm such a bad@$$ xD
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on April 02, 2015
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on March 27, 2015
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on March 27, 2015
OMG, CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! ITS AWESOME, GIRL!!!
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Whoa ? thank you!
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on March 15, 2015
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on March 15, 2015
its not cool.......

ITS A-MAZE-ING-LY AWESOME!
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Thank you! Your character is next ?
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on February 22, 2015
Yep maybe tomorrow I'll put the next chapter
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on February 22, 2015
really? wow! can't wait to read the next chapter!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
I love it! :3
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Can you send me a link of her?
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Got it
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Sure!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Thank you!
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Your welcome
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on February 22, 2015
Raven the hedgebat please. Thank you!
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on February 22, 2015
You did? But I did it get it
You know what this is the ONLY time I'm going to do this
What character do you want to put in this?
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on February 22, 2015
Is it too late to ask for one of my characters to be in there? I requested one and it wasn't on the list.
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
The names actually 'Swift Element The Dark HedgeWolf' But close enough!!! Love it! Can't wait for the next chap!!
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Oops sorry and thank you!
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Sure thing! ?
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Last day to get some characters I already have
Octavia the wolf bot
Swift the dark hedgewolf
Lana the wolf
Ruby the hedgebat See More
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Hmmm times up I guess I'll just random pick
Rouge and well blaze is-
Silver: *frown*
Uh- *eyes widen* I'll just put Connor
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on February 09, 2015
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on February 02, 2015
Cool! :D
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Thankz
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
Thankz for catching that I'll change it once the times up
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on January 31, 2015
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on January 31, 2015
Its awesome! But there's a little typo. Celina's full name is Celina Shadows, not Celina The Cat. Sowwy it bugs meh x3
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on January 30, 2015
Ok! You three can be in it I just have think somethin up to squeeze you guys in the story
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on January 29, 2015
Can I be in it? :3 Love it btw!
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on January 28, 2015
Can melody be in it?
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on January 28, 2015
I'll be in it if you want, nice job so far!!!
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on January 28, 2015