Another World

Another World

Abigail was a normal girl. Until two strange men wearing modern black suites told her they were taking her to a Academy of Technology. Turns out, it was a whole lot more.

published on June 03, 2014not completed

The Plondok

I left the globe and found a shady spot to sit under a metI've l tree with glass leaves. "So ths must be  he park of their world." Wow. I slid the disk out and examined it. It was like a phone, but crazier. It was made of a thin piece of cool metal, most likely steel, and a layer of glass fit perfectly on it. I tapped the screen. No response. Suddenly, a female voice blared from it. "Hello, Silver. Welcome to Luxuria, Academy of the future. I am powered by voice. Try it out. Talk to me." It was obviously a   robotic voice, yet it had a warm tone to it.
"Hi. This is Silver. This is my voice."
I smiled.
"Hello. Please do not talk to me in a robotic voice. It does not sound very nice." I laughed. For the next couple minutes, we chatted and talked about school. I heard light footsteps from behind. Startled, I swerved around to face Dawn.
"Hey. Figured out how to work your thing?" she winked and brushed a strand of hair out of  her eyes. "Yeah."
My device said "What a evil girl. Let's get rid of her. I can teach you a few insu-"
I cut it off and glared at it. " Dawn is my friend. Don't you ever dare say that again." "Sorry Silver. Dawn. Year one. Friend. Saved. I've just programmed that." I nodded my acceptance and turned to face Dawn.
"I haven't figured out how to use this thing yet." Dawn pulled her disk.
"Oh, I'll help you with that."
She smiled. "Meanwhile why don't we go to the Plondok?" Obviously confused, I questioned about its existence. As it turns out, the Plondok was a building where the ultimate makeovers were done. She guided my gaze to a glass scraper that spiraled into the clouds.  We headed that way.

Author: Sorry about the short chapter. The next ones will be longer. Promise!
Also, I'm on vacation, my Internet has been terrible, and I've been writing offline,  then copy and paste ing the whole thing, and ON MY PHONE. It is absolutely hardwork. Anyways, connection to the Web is bad, so I can't attach a pic. But when I have the chance, I will. The next chapter might be in a while, a long while. Like a month even. Sorry for the hold!
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Did gonna be updated?? IT BETTER
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haha thanks,,,
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Seriously though...
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on October 07, 2014
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on October 07, 2014
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on October 07, 2014
This is REALLY good!
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on October 04, 2014
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on October 04, 2014
write moreeeee
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on August 08, 2014
Thank you so much for adding a new chapter. I know had how hard it is to add them while you're vacationing in Og ;)
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*Nods her acceptance*
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on July 09, 2014
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on July 08, 2014
Is this story discontinued? It is super awesome, when are you writing more?
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I wrote many new chapters. I don't have good Interne here girly.
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on July 07, 2014
Oops, sorry!
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on June 28, 2014
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on June 28, 2014
OC:
Name: Indigo
Original Name: Avery
Year: 1
Awesome story!
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Thanks
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on June 28, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
This is awesome! Thanks for including my OC Gwen/Dawn
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Lol. No. I'm not a banana. I'm a blueberry. :-B like duh.B)
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@JeweledOwl812 moi is funnnaaaay!:D
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on July 25, 2014
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on July 02, 2014
No! Oops i mean np
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LOL I was like "Help my best friend is turning into a banana!"
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on June 28, 2014
Ikr? I am soo funny! *flips hair* JK
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on June 04, 2014
Here is my OC!

Name: Crystaline
Original name: Lindsay
Year: 1
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on June 04, 2014
More!!!
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More. Ok.
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on June 04, 2014
My OC:
Character Name: Hailey
Original Name: Amanda
Year: 2
(btw is Another World like a real series/tv show or something or did you make it up?)
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Nope i made it up.
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cool :D
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on July 02, 2014
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on June 03, 2014
Cool! I've got an OC for you if you want to use it!
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I thought you changed the first name. Cuz remember? You changed hailey. In the story the names are different.
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I didn't change anything :p
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on July 02, 2014
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on July 02, 2014
Sorry i haven't included it yet. Can you tell me the name again? Soooo sorry. I haven't had good Internet yet. I'm on vacation.
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character name: Hailey
original name: Amanda
year: 2
:p there you go! :D
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on June 03, 2014
I did!
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on June 03, 2014
Cool! Write more!!!!!!
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on June 03, 2014
Aaaw. .. Thanks!
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on June 03, 2014
Cool story!
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on June 03, 2014
Thanks!
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on June 03, 2014
Aweaome
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Thank you person! Btw i also like music
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