Code Diamond

Code Diamond

Diamond the hedgehog is a regular Mobian. She doesn't know she's the daughter of a famous secret agent and wanted by two squads. The "Secret Darkness" a group of evil mobians and the "Legend Agents" which want to help her and protect her from the "Secret Darkness."

published on July 30, 2014not completed

Chapter 2 | Noises again

Diamond's P.O.V

"Are you COMPLETELY sure all of this was real?" My friend Sarah the hedgehog says as I tell her the whole story of the night before through the phone. "YES!" I insist. "I'm completely sure!" I hear Sarah hold her breath. "Ok... Just call me if anything else happens ok?" Sarah says. "Sure." I reply. I hang up the phone and slump in my chair.

Sarah's P.O.V

"We can't let Diamond know anything about—" I start. "I know... We have to keep it hidden as long as we can." Miku says. "What if she finds out? The "Secret Shadows" are picking up pace... She might find out really soon." Kameo asks with a concerned look. "J-just... The commander said all we can do right now is be her friend so we can catch up on all the attacks the S.S (Secret Shadows) are doing." I replied. Everyone nodded in agreement.

Diamond's P.O.V

"I'm going out for a few hours!" My mom exclaims. "Ok." I reply. As soon as she's gone I start hearing the noises again. I push them aside and start try calling my friends, Sarah, Camille, Miku and Kameo but they don't  reply. All if a sudden the day darkens almost to night. I bolt up in my chair and peer outside the window. The sky is pitch black. Suddenly, all the lights turn off. I try the switch but it doesn't work. "Dang... The power's out." I sigh. I try to call my mom but the phone says "No Service." I start getting desperate. Then the voices start again. I cover my ears, but they seem like they're in my head. All of a sudden I see shadows... Clearly Mobians...

"Get away from me!" I cry. Suddenly my window shatters. "Why does that window always get shattered!" I think out loud. Four new hedgehogs jump in through the window. "So we meet again Agent Shimmer..." One of the hedgehogs growls. A girls voice speaks up. "Yes... And this time we won't lose." Agent Shimmer says. "No! We wi—" The hedgehog starts. "STOP IT!" I yell. Everyone silences. "What's going on?! Who are you all?!" I shriek. "We don't have time to explain. Agent Shimmer says. "Wait! Wha—" I start, but the light flickers and turns on. When I look back, no one's there anymore. I hold my head and pass out.

Sarah's P.O.V

"Agent Shimmer huh?" Miku laughs. "Don't call me that..." I say. Miku laughs again.
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Do you still accept OC's?
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yes, but i won't add chapters in a long time. i don't have time. i'll take your OC though :d i'll try to add a chapter soon
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on October 22, 2014
Awesome chapter!!
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on September 09, 2014
Awesome!
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on September 08, 2014
Loved it please make more chapthers! :D
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on September 08, 2014
Wow, this totally gives Jackie's history in Dauntless initiation!
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on September 07, 2014
Love it! 8D! Thanks for adding me in the story! Even though I'm going to be i'm the next chapter! Can't wait for it!
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on September 07, 2014
@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @JackieTheHedgehog @JeweledOwl812 @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @SwiftElementTheDarkWolf @Yamilettethehedgehog101 I updated Code Diamond!
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Yay I'm gonna read it right now!
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on September 08, 2014
Awesome!
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on September 07, 2014
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on September 07, 2014
Great story!
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thanks you :d
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on September 01, 2014
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on September 01, 2014
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! XD
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Thanks :3
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on August 22, 2014
I'll PM you it later
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on August 22, 2014
Thanks!!! Or what exactly? X3
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on August 22, 2014
Sure! I can add you as a new recruit or.. i have a better idea! *goes into writing lab to write idea*
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on August 22, 2014
Hey... Umm... Can I be in it? I just wanna be part of the awesomeness!!! XD If your gonna add me the names Agent Dark. But you don't need to add me. I'll understand if they're to many people in it allready. :)
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on August 22, 2014
No problem! X3
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on August 22, 2014
@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @GymnasticsBubbleZo @JackieTheHedgehog @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @Yamilettethehedgehog101 100+ READS PEOPLE!!
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OMG SWEET!
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on August 20, 2014
99 READS GUYS
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on August 20, 2014
Awesome chapter :D
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on August 18, 2014
Oh yeah Agent Dauntless!
Also, a heads up, there can be times where Jackie will unleash her full Dauntless side, and by that, I mean she doesn't hold ANYTHING back!!
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on August 18, 2014
@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @GymnasticsBubbleZo @JackieTheHedgehog @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @Yamilettethehedgehog101 I updated Code Diamond! //Jackie, you're in it!
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I love it, and I love the idea where you got Jackie's training from, but you forgot to mention Jackie's Dauntless experience.
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Well maybe I could give you ideas for when writing it. I already know how you could start the chapter off XD
I'll tell you in PM
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on August 21, 2014
Sure! How would you like to help?
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on August 21, 2014
Maybe I could help, seeming as it will be in MY OC's POV
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on August 21, 2014
LOLOL
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on August 21, 2014
ok. i think i'll have to make an all jackie's pov chapter XD
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on August 21, 2014
And if you don't know the stages:
Stage 1 is physical combat training.
Stage 2 is about fear hallucinations, and controlling your fears.
Stage 3 is the final test, which is the Fear Landscape (all your worst fears combined, which you face one after the other in one big hallucination)
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on August 20, 2014
Alright! Awesome
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on August 20, 2014
Details of her initiation you'll need to know:
She was the first jumper (first person to jump down from the roof, into the Dauntless compound itself)
3rd in stage 1 rankings.
1st in stage 2 rankings.
She was invited to join other Dauntless-born initiates to go zip lining from the 100-storey building (all the Dauntless call it the Hancock building) See More
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on August 20, 2014
I'll try to add it in next chapter :3
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on August 18, 2014
Almost 100 reads!
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on August 17, 2014
So awesome!
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on August 12, 2014
I love it! I so need more!
Also, sorry to nag and all about this, if it sounds that way, but when will Jackie appear in this?
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i'll try to add her in next chapter. :)
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on August 12, 2014
If you're gonna make her an agent, I've got 2 selections of code names for you to use.
She can be called either Agent Dauntless or Agent Divergent
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on August 11, 2014
Awesome chapther please make more :D
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k. i'm writing some more
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on August 11, 2014
AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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I'm gonna read it right now!
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on August 11, 2014
I know it was awesome!
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on August 11, 2014
I read it and I loved it!
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on August 11, 2014
Trust me you'll love it.
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on August 11, 2014
I can't wait to read it
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on August 11, 2014
IT'S AWESOME!!
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@CamilleTheHedgehog14 @ginathehedgefox @GymnasticsBubbleZo @JackieTheHedgehog @KameoRose @sapphirethehedgehog @Starrthehedgehog @Yamilettethehedgehog101 I updated Code Diamond!
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on August 11, 2014
LOVED IT!!!! Please right more
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on August 08, 2014
Loved it please make more chapthers! :D
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Ok :) I will soon
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@GymnasticsBubbleZo
@JackieTheHedgehog
@KameoRose
@CamilleTheHedgehog14
@Yamilettethehedgehog101 See More
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I'm gonna read it right now!
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on August 04, 2014
Loved it please make more chapthers! :D
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on August 03, 2014
@GymnasticsBubbleZo
@JackieTheHedgehog
@KameoRose
@CamilleTheHedgehog14
@Yamilettethehedgehog101 See More
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yay im gonna read it right now! :D
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on August 03, 2014
OMG AWESOME!!!
Can I be in this?
If I'm gonna be one of those agent things as well...
I got dibs on either Agent Dauntless or Agent Divergent! B)
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on July 31, 2014
Loved it please make more chapthers :D
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on July 31, 2014
Yah I'm in it!!!
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on July 31, 2014
Wait he calls me starlight or is that someone else's name
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That's Your Code Name.
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Ok don't tell me
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on July 31, 2014
........
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on July 31, 2014
...Come on what the matter?
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on July 31, 2014
Nevermind.
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on July 31, 2014
What's oh mean?
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on July 31, 2014
I just hope the next one I have more than one line. Not that I'm complaining.
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on July 31, 2014
I Know!!
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on July 31, 2014
Cool I love being an agent!
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on July 31, 2014
I'm Agent Jewelray.
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on July 31, 2014
Cool I love it!!
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