Starting Now

Starting Now

Starting Now, my life just got a whole lot worse, so I MADE A POEM HAHAAHAHAHH im just trying to keep myself in a good mood! MEH Idk what else to put on here so...BYE

published on April 18, 2017not completed

Dead

I can't walk
I can't talk
I can't breath
Nor I can see

If I knew
That Life came to an end
I would have
Paused it

Its dark
Trapped in sleep
Forever have a dream?
A song says life is a dream..

Then this is all a memory..
I don't understand
Why Life has to come to an end
If there is such thing as life

Death is the scarest shit i've ever expericend.
Taking that last breath
Then close your eyes..
And its over.

Now Im in a casket
People burring me in the ground
Its Cold in here
Save me

IM NOT DEAD!!!
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heyo is poem hah
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it is :O
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how u kno
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on May 23, 2019
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on May 23, 2019
I'm in love with you too and i know i made mistakes but you gotta make those mistakes to get better than them and be the best you and that's what i'm willing to with you
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I dont know how to respond <3 I love you

But for real, I did not expect you to read it so soon :O
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..Okay Amaze hehe <3
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on May 23, 2019
no the poem was beautiful and well written

and i love you too
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on May 23, 2019
I'm glad too.. I love you

But dont you lie to me that poem is trash..the feels are real but its trash
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on May 23, 2019
it's good though and i'm glad that we'll become better for each other
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on May 23, 2019
I promise to do the same. I'll make myself a better person for you

I think Imma re-do that one anyway. I made it when I was 13 on paper and I found it 2 years later and bam.
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on May 23, 2019
well i saw it in my news feed so i checked it out and the second chapter made me realize my mistakes but like i said i'm willing to learn from them with you
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on May 23, 2019
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on May 23, 2019
Woah... I friggin' cried!
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;-;
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on July 04, 2017
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on July 04, 2017
"Three sides"
Republican, democrat, and chocolate
Which side
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CHOCOLATE!
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Good
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on June 30, 2017
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on June 30, 2017
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on June 30, 2017
That third poem. It's the most fricking amazing poem in the world!!!
*cries from the beauty*
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on April 18, 2017
That's really good. You're good at poems.
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Thank you, Im glad you like it :D
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Thank you, I am pleased that you enjoyed reading it
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on April 18, 2017
You did a great job.
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on April 18, 2017
The feels. Good writing. @VineVineVinewaitmine
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We have more but they´re on the pic I posted!
JOIN US!!!!!
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on April 18, 2017
Well
THIRTY FFING EIGHT YOU AND EMO
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What can I tell you? We are just that awesome!
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