More Than Sibling Love (Dipper x Mabel fanfic)

More Than Sibling Love (Dipper x Mabel fanfic)

Dipper and Mable Pines are close friends, partially because of them growing up together, being twins, and facing the supernatural wackiness that is the town of Gravity Falls, Oregon. But the main thing is something neither of them prepared for. Falling in love. And who is the best person to fall in love with than someone who knows everything about you? Both are too shy to make the first move, so they don't know the other feels the same. I might get hate because of this, but I just wanted to try it.

published on March 10, 2016not completed

Moment of Truth (Mabel's P.O.V)

                                                                        Mabel's Diary Entry #2
                                                                        June 24, 2016

        This is it... the moment of truth... life or death... after this, no turning back... "Do you have any.... threes?" Dipper asked me. I looked and smiled wide.
        "Nope! Go Fish!" I giggled, watching him get mad and attempt to flip the table that was nailed to the ground because of the "anti-gravity" situation. This time, he used some of Grunkle Stan's choice words, and a bit more that Old Man McGucket uses. It's been about a week after the party, and everything has been normal (As normal as Gravity Falls can be). Me and Dipdop are secretly now, and we like it. Problem is, we can't tell any of our friends or family about it...
        I was thinking about what would happen if our friends and family found out, that I didn't realize Dipper was looking at me. "What, do I have left over toothpaste on my cheeks?" I checked, cause I ate a whole tube of toothpaste because it was sparkly... again... for the eighteenth time... this week... it was becoming an addiction...
        "No, you just look... ticklish!" He taclked me and started tickling me. I couldn't stop laughing. He had me pinned to the floor, tickling my sides, neck, armpits, nothing was spared. Then, he stopped.
        "W-What...?" I looked him in his eyes. He leaned forward. I did to. We met half way, our eyes closed. If someone walked in, it would look wrong. Well, it is, of course, but, that isn't important. Little did we know, Wendy was watching from the attic window.... I pulled back and turned to the window, with the instinct feeling that we were being watched. I only saw long red hair go up to the roof before my stomach sank. "Uh oh..."
        "What do you mean?"
        "Someone knows..."
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Are they siblings in this story?
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(@TheEighthHorcrux, yes)
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on April 18, 2016
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on April 18, 2016
I like it so far. I feel like you could have gone into more detail about the "most popular guy at school" and explained why he was so popular and how that made Dipper confused about it. I also feel like even though it's cliche' when someone gets a crush on someone else they always feel like the scum of the Earth and they are a God/Goddess from above. For example See More
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True and, thanks.
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NP. Any thing to help a fellow Qfeaster.
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on March 13, 2016
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