More Than Sibling Love (Dipper x Mabel fanfic)

More Than Sibling Love (Dipper x Mabel fanfic)

Dipper and Mable Pines are close friends, partially because of them growing up together, being twins, and facing the supernatural wackiness that is the town of Gravity Falls, Oregon. But the main thing is something neither of them prepared for. Falling in love. And who is the best person to fall in love with than someone who knows everything about you? Both are too shy to make the first move, so they don't know the other feels the same. I might get hate because of this, but I just wanted to try it.

published on March 10, 2016not completed

Tripping Over My Words (Mabel's P.O.V)

                                            June, 10, 2016
                           Mabel's diary entry

     Dear diary,
                     I saw my crush without a shirt today! I blushed soooo much! I was in my house, and I went to mine and Dipper's room, opened the door and there he was, taking off his shirt, back towards me. His back had so much muscle, he looked like a body builder. His scars gave him a sense of danger. He received them from our countless journeys and adventure. Most of them, though, were on his chest from when Bill possessed him. As I was admiring the way his muscles rippled with every movement, I didn't notice that Dipper was looking at me. "Huh?" I asked like an idiot.
        "I asked, 'are you alright?'" He said, looking into my eyes. My face grew redder. "Your face is red, do you have a fever?" he asked as he grabbed my cheeks with his palms and put his forehead against mine and closed his eyes. My face grew darker, and my eyes went to his lips. I was just looking when Waddles oinked behind me, causing my to jump forward in fright, my lips landing on his. My eyes grew wide as my face reddened. I was so embarrassed!!!
        I pulled back and tried to apologize, but I was babbling like an idiot. Next thing I know, Dipper grabbed my cheeks again and kissed me again. 'What?!' I thought, as I kissed back. 'does he have the same feelings as me?' We broke the kiss, but before I asked, he was gone, leaving me with a red face, a brain of mush and a rapidly beating heart.

        -Mabel Pines
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Are they siblings in this story?
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(@TheEighthHorcrux, yes)
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on April 18, 2016
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on April 18, 2016
I like it so far. I feel like you could have gone into more detail about the "most popular guy at school" and explained why he was so popular and how that made Dipper confused about it. I also feel like even though it's cliche' when someone gets a crush on someone else they always feel like the scum of the Earth and they are a God/Goddess from above. For example See More
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True and, thanks.
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NP. Any thing to help a fellow Qfeaster.
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on March 13, 2016
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