The Story Of Starr The Hedgehog (1)

The Story Of Starr The Hedgehog (1)

This is my first story so please no mean comments and if there is anyone you want me to add or you would like to be in the story please tell me. I hope you like it!

published on July 31, 2014not completed

Author's Note

Ugh... I look back at this stuff and I feel slightly cringey. No, super cringey. I really don't know if I'll continue this or not, because I feel as if less and less people will read it or care (cuz' I wouldn't really care about this either XD). But, it is rather tempting to redo this whole thing. Though for me, it's kind of a waste to write a story, but no one reads it. Still, this story has some potential. Also, it's probably just me, but I made Starr to Mary-Sueish in this one. I definitely need to change that. Okie, people. Goodbye and don't be surprised if I post a redo of this by tomorrow (*looks at clock* *sees it's 12:56* Um, I'll redo in a couple hours I guess XD)
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 8 users

Comments (53)

MOOOOOORRRREEEEE
Can alice the cat be in it? She is a light brown cat wearing a white shirt, grey jacket, grey skirt, and sonic shoes
she also has dark brown hair
reply
About Author
Report
on October 21, 2015
About Author
Report
on June 09, 2015
More! More! More!
reply
About Author
Report
on October 24, 2014
This is getting so good!!! Please write more!! Also, can Swift be in it? You know, if it isn't much trouble?
reply
Yes yes she can
reply
Thanks Starr! :D
reply
About Author
Report
on August 28, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 28, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 19, 2014
XD I feel ike the silly one who always plays pranks. This is awesome!
reply
XD Thanks!
reply
About Author
Report
on August 20, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 20, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 19, 2014
Yeah..That was harsh, Crimsons a demon too Candy, Yet you arent like that to her
reply
It's because Candy loves Silver too.
reply
About Author
Report
on October 24, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
Awesome chapthers please make more :D
reply
I shall!
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
That's okay Lol XD
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
Ok I've ran out of smiley faces XD
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
Awesome story!! Can my oc Sky be in it?
reply
Absolutely!
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
Anytime girl anytime...B)
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
Thanks:D
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
awesome picture starr :D
reply
Oh thank you!
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
No problem ;)
reply
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 10, 2014
About Author
Report
on August 05, 2014
:) thanks! Btw, I agree the email thing is super annoying... I hope you fix it soon! Btw cool story :)
reply
About Author
Report
on August 04, 2014
Awesome chapter can my oc yamilett be in it?
reply
About Author
Report
on August 03, 2014
AWESOME!
Could Crimson be in it?
Shes the daughter of Dawn a hedge angel thats a lady of Luxor(made up angel city) and Vladimir a demon that is the main lord of Nightshade(demon city). So shes a demon, her brother Dusk is also a demon and rarely seen
reply
About Author
Report
on August 01, 2014
LOVE it!!! Please please please please PLEASE write more!!!!! >_<
reply
About Author
Report
on August 01, 2014
So good! Can Jackie be in this?
Just so you know (in case you forgot) she's the Queen of Dauntless.
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
Immortal mean not mortal and mortal means that you can get sick ad die and stuff like that
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
Can Candy be in it? Maybe they could fight over Silver!
reply
Ok! :) But can you put Candy in it?
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
Um...but I don't know who would win Silver...if you win it'd hurt me and if I win it would hurt you. I wouldn't want to hurt your feelings...
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
Awesom story :D
reply
Thank you! I'll make some more tomorrow I feel lazy today XD
reply
Okay I can't wait to read more tommorrow :D
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
awsome!,also can crystal be in it,after all its her lost siter
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
Awesome!!
reply
Thank you
reply
No Problem.
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014