Mystic Charm

Mystic Charm

This is an ongoing chapter Fantasy Story involving magic, and more. This tells the quest of 'angels', which in this story are female mages. It has romance, drama, and action. I've drawn it in a manga like style, but I'm converting it to stories for Qfeast.

published on April 07, 2015not completed

Encounters: new, and old part 1

"Hey, are you okay?" Mei asked the upset guy. "Yeah, I'm just a little stressed okay"? The guy obviously didn't want to talk. Mei wanted to respect that, but at the same time she felt like she had to help him. "Alright...." Mei slowly started to walk toward the assembly room. The strange guy got up, and walked over to Mei. "Just wondering, what is the source of your magical abilities"? The question seemed strange but Mei answered: "It's from emotion, and feeling. Why"? "Oh, nothing I just figured you were. By the way I'm Aiden". Aiden seemed a little happier. "Well, I'm Mei, see you around". Mei headed to her dorm, while Aiden just turned around, and smiled. Aiden had dark brown hair, and dark brown eyes. He was light skinned(white).
    Mei walked into the apartment area, and saw Kara, and another girl in hers, and Kara's dorm. Mei kept thinking about Aiden. He just lingered in her mind. Mei was lost in thought when Kara said: "Hey Mei, come meet Ami". Mei looked up. Ami was a busty girl with long blond hair in a pony tail, and hazel eyes. She had on a pink mini-skirt, and a cropped orange T-shirt with striped, short sleeves. Ami introduced herself. "Hey, Kara's told me about you. Nice to meet you, I'm Ami". "Oh, hi I'm Mei". Kara smiled at her two friends. "Hey Ami, do you know where Erika is?" Ami replied back to Kara: Yeah, she told me she'd be a few days late due to family matters". Kara was a little disappointed. I hope she's going to be here soon. Kara thought.
    The three girls talked a little about themselves so Mei would get to know Kara, and Ami well. At about 12:00 A.M they decided to go to sleep, and Ami returned to her own room. Ami woke up in the middle of the night she went outside on her dorm apartments veranda, and looked into sky. "Erika I hope you're alright". Ami said quietly to herself.
     The girls she shared the dorm apartment with including her roommate Brittanie was asleep. No sounds but the chirping off birds was heard. In the Lunar Realm where they were at, and where Brittanie is from Night doves ( black swan looking birds) chirp at night, the sound comforted Ami until she went back inside ready to go to sleep again. As Ami walked into the dorm apartment she saw a strange presence. An old woman was in there. Her face reminded her of Mei's, and her black hair was cut neatly to just past her shoulders. She was wearing a eerie blue robe, and was a sickening pale, almost see through white color. She was just out side of Mei's room.
    The old woman walked into Mei's room sensing Ami's presence. Mei was tossing, and turning in her sleep. The old woman gently shook Mei. Mei woke up, and was shocked. "Hey, I've seen you before. Wait it was on the air-bus! Who are you?! Mei was looking into the woman's eyes. All the strange woman had to say was: " Mei, dear, I've missed you". The woman used her powers to manifest her emotions, and memories into visible flashbacks to show Mei. The first one showed them right now, the second one showed them on the air bus. However the third one went back 17 years ago, and showed the old woman with a woman that looked like Mei's mother, and a baby that looked just like Mei....
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Its a really cool story (story tip...hope you dont mind... your charaters are super well developed, but try working on the ebb and flow of the story plot and story details):)
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on April 08, 2015