Awakend
(Really original title right.Well anyway here's the story, hope you'll not hate it :3)
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'.... it's, quiet... Where am I again?
I, I think.. I don't remember. Well atleast I'm at peace here, I guess...
Ah, it's also so dark. Why isn't there light? If it's night time there would atleast be moonlight right? Or starlight?... Anyway it's dark...
I feel cold... Why isn't there warmth?.. Agh, I really want warmth.. Why is it so cold though? I don't hear the fan. Wait, what's a 'fan'?...
Urgh, all this thinking is really giving me a headache... Wait a minute, 'pain'? How can I feel pain? Didn't I die?..
Hold up, I 'died'? But, how am I here then?
I should probably take a break from all this. Yeah a break sounds nice about now. Maybe take a lil nap and-
WAIT, I felt something just now. It, it felt like wind. Maybe a breeze. I don't know, but atleast I know why it's so cold.
Why aren't there any blankets? Maybe I'm outside? But that still doesn't solve why there isn't light. Maybe I had my eyes closed all this time?
WOW, I feel so stupid now.
Well.. I should look at the bright side, atleast I was already taking a nap... I think... and it's still dark so there isn't an actual bright side...
But maybe there is something dangerous out there, so I should probably keep my eyes closed for a while.. maybe if I concentrate enough...
... I just heard something... It sounded like, like 'grass'? Am I in a field? But I don't feel any grass touching me. Maybe I'm lying 'close' to a field but not actually 'in' it. Yeah that's probably it...
.. But where am I then?... I do feel I Am sitting on and against something... I'm 'sitting'?...
Oke, I should probably stop assuming stuff and just open my eyes shouldn't I... Well here goes...'
She carefully opened her eyes. And immediately closed them again.
...It was too bright...
She blinked a few more times before she got used to the light.
And when she did she was amazed.
There was grass almost everywhere she looked. It was tall, green and really almost everywhere. She could barely look over it to see that there was no end in sight.
She wanted to stand to see if there really was no end in sight. She put her hand down and notised. It wasn't grass.
Finally her gaze left the grass to see that she was sitting on ground. She patted it. Yup, definitely earth.
She looked were there was ground to see, it formed a circle around her. She tried backing away, as her back hit something. She looked behind her.
...It was a tree... She looked up.
It was a big tree.
But, there was something wrong about it's bark. It had allot of unnatural looking black spots.
She looked up again.
High up she could see branches, but they didn't have any leafs. She looked at them till she spotted a single leaf. It was pretty tiny though.
She stood up. She looked at the tiny leaf and then down to herself. She felt, tiny, as well.
She looked at her open palm and saw how little it was. It looked like a 6-year-olds hand. Then she looked down at her body. She wasn't naked.
She was wearing a very simple peach dress, and it fitted her tiny body quite well. Then she looked down at her feet, and saw her even tinier toes. She looked in the corner of her gaze to see long curly brown hair drapping from her head. She touched it, and it felt quite soft.
She probably looked very cute.
She looked at the tiny leaf again. She tried to reach it she heared something behind the tree.
She looked at what seems a big dog poking it's head out and looking at her.
"I wouldn't grab the leaf if I were you." It said with a femenine voice.
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~Cliffhanger~
So what did you guys and gals think? Was the paste of the story too slow, not informative enough, confusing, or something else or was it oke?
Well this is only the beginning but I would still like opinions.
And thanks for reading, and till the next chapter :3
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