Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

This is the story of a young hedgehog. Torn apart from her parents when she was young, all she's known in life is one little room she's been trapped in, and torture and abuse. All she wishes for in life is to get away from her abuser and live free. Will it ever come true?

published on June 06, 2014not completed

Chapter 1: The Present Day

Chapter 1: The Present Day Layla
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All my life I've only known the feeling of isolation, pain, torture and abuse. I've only seen one little room with no window and only a mattress for furniture. And I've only ever seen one other being. Tye.
Though I wish I never have. I know torture and abuse because of Tye.
Because HE is my abuser.
I sit on my mattress, looking to the ground, when Tye storms in my room, smirking. His hands are clenched into fists.
"Stay away from me," I say. "Just leave me alone!"
"Are you denying me, Layla?" Tye asks in a low voice.
"Of course I am! You're horrible!"
Tye then becomes even angrier and grabs hold of my arms, pinning them onto the mattress. "NEVER, say no to me, Layla!" He then loosens his belt from his trousers, and starts lashing at me with it. He's done that for as long as I can remember. It's left bruise after bruise on my fur. I used to have soft, beautiful, red fur. Now bruises, cuts and wounds have replaced it. The only part of my figure that remains red is my face, my feet and my spines, which acts as my hair.
I try and struggle free from his grasp, but he only grips tighter on my arms, trying to keep me pinned to the mattress.
"Get OFF of me!" I shout, and kick him again.
And he does, but he walks towards the door. "And when I come back, I expect you to respect me!"
He slams the door, and locks it shut. I bury my face into the pillow on my mattress and sob my heart out.
Why must my life be this way? Filled with the torture I have to put up with?
I just want to be free.
Please... if anyone can hear me out there...
I want to get my freedom back!
Please... help me!
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on June 09, 2016
Can u write more and add me PWEAZE?!
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on June 27, 2015
Whoa.... It took you a long time to make the next chap xD but it's nice.. :3
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on February 02, 2015
Awesome story! Can u add me?
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on August 11, 2014
Np ;)
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on June 06, 2014
Thank you for adding me!
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on June 06, 2014
I can't wait for chapter 4! If it's OK with you can my OC be part of the story? You know if it's OK with you.
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on June 06, 2014
I am writing more MD, and yeah I'm taking OC's. That's why I decided to include FandomLover's OC, Eli.
Do you want Dawn to be part of the Freedom Fighters???
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on June 06, 2014
Please write more! Tell me if you accept OC's. It's okay if you don't.
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on June 06, 2014
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on June 06, 2014
Can't Wait For Third Chapter
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on June 06, 2014
Log the story! :,)
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