Lies

Lies

I have written a story about what can happen to you, even though we dont hear about this stuff everyday it does happen. I hope you enjoy my story. This story is for ages 11+

published on July 30, 2014completed

mum66

I heard foot-steps going up the stairs,
"Eleanor-Jane? Is that you screaming?" a voice asked. It was Mum, how could I explain myself?
"Mum, this is Frankie, he's a boy and we've just had sex", I couldn't. "Yes Mum, its Me. Come quick!" I screamed, Mum charged up the stairs, the fury in her face scared me. Mum took one glace and Frankie and screamed "Get out of my house, get out! I dont care who you are or why your here!". Frankie paused, "Could you pass me my clothes?" Frankie asked Mum, Mum picked up his clothes and threw them at him. Frankie quickly changed into his clothes and ran out the door.
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the grammar is a bit off but besides that! pretty good! ^-^
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on June 24, 2015
good message
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on April 11, 2015
Wonderful I Like The Message You Have Very Importent
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on November 22, 2014
Good message. :D
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on August 02, 2014
I was thinking 'oh, no, not another dirty story', but when I finished it I thought 'actually, this has a really good message'. This is a very important life story, and I wouldn't mind seeing more like it. Good job! :)
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on July 31, 2014
I like how you added to the message that girls can too, because it isn't just the boys! :Þ
But I understand your message and also, keeping secrets actually can form stress and such.
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Yes, thankyou very much !!! xx
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on July 30, 2014
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on July 30, 2014