Eevee Life

Eevee Life

here's a funny, mysterious, adventurous, cool, and imaginary story for you and your friends to read! take care and be safe

published on May 24, 2014completed

Rare Eevee!

Katlyn stared directly at Becka, then Bolt.Katlyn was confused too"W-what mark?"Katlyn whispered to herself.her shy and soft voice filled Becka's ears."The evolution mark!"Becka answered Katlyn's question.Bolt went racing to the leader."Uhm what does it mean when a baby eevee just born does't have a marking?"Bolt asked worriedly."It means that the eevee is very rare, very rare indeed."The leader, which is known as Jake answered.(Jake is a glaceon by the way).Bolt gasped"R-rare!?!".Bolt went rushing to Becka"Katlyn is rare!!!".Becka then gasped"Rare...? are you lying to me?!?"Becka questioned. "NO!"Bolt yelled.Katlyn, Candy, and Flair were very confused about the conversation Mom and Dad were having.5 years then pasted. Katlyn, Candy, and Flair were old enough to adventure the outsides, but they couldn't leave the forest."Katlyn, wait! we can't leave the forest!" Flair yelled at Katlyn."W-why?"Katlyn asked in her very shy voice."because mom said. the whole forest is ours but the outdoors is the monsters' territory!"Flair answered."Oh...".Flair flickered his ear as if he just got his memory back."Katlyn, did you know your rare?"."N-n-no...."Katlyn pulled her ears back"And can you please stop yelling?"."Oh, yeah..."Flair said in an apologizing voice.
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I like it <3
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on July 14, 2014
Do you mind a bit of grammar, other than that- it's good.
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on May 24, 2014