Bloodshed

Bloodshed

Marcella Hodgedon lives in the year 3045, where war is a part of everyday life. Her best friend and battle partner, Kev Martin, always stays by her side. The two of them have a collection of "character stones," which are small rocks with key traits or elements carved into them. But war isn't always easy...

published on April 27, 2015completed

Pain

Pain
The next day, I immediately run to the medical wing. Kev is lying on a thin bed. It's scary to see him, with tubes sticking in his arms and legs, and a mask over his mouth and nose. I hold his hand and bite my lip.
Suddenly, Kya enters the room. "There's a... problem." she says. I widen my eyes. Kya sighs. "He- he can live, but..."
"But what?" I whisper.
"He will... live the rest of his life with brain damage." Kya says, frowning.
My breath catches in my throat. I don't want to force a life of suffering on my best friend. I look at Kev, so peaceful lying there. I look back at Kya. Then, I shake my head. "Do it..." I say. "Let him go."
Kya sadly smiles and a tear rolls down her cheek onto Kev's bedspread. With a trembling hand, she pushes a button on a machine next to Kev's bed. A whirring noise echoes. Tubes retract from Kev's body and he gives a shuddering sigh.
Eyelids fluttering, Kev grasps my hand. "You did it..." he whispers. A look of great content spreads over his face. "Did what, Kev?" I ask. Kev grunts. "You saved me..."
Eyes wide, I look at Kya. Then I look back at Kev. "N-no, you don't understand, Kev... you're not okay, you're... you're dying."
Kev coughs up blood. His face looks disappointed. "I'm... dying..." he whispers. I nod. A single tear rolls down his cheek. "Never... never going to see you again?" he asks. That small question of insecurity melts my heart. I slowly shake my head.
He groans, and the heart rate monitor slows. I clench his hand as tight as I can. I have to keep him from slipping away. But it's not working. I can see in his eyes that death is slipping in. Before I can do anything else, the monitor flatlines.
My body is too numb to do anything except lean forward and kiss him on the forehead. When I do that, his heart beats for a few more seconds and a smile spreads across his face before his heartbeat disappears.
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i give it a five
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Thanks! :D
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no problem :)
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on June 21, 2015
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on June 18, 2015
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on June 18, 2015
he died and now i'm on my bed trembleing :((
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on June 18, 2015
love it!
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Thanks!! :D
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on June 18, 2015
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on June 18, 2015
I love it!
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:) thanks :D
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on May 14, 2015
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on May 14, 2015
5! I love it, pls write more, and explain exactly what the character stones are and why they're important
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Didn't I explain that in the description?
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No it's great! I really love it I was just wondering what they were for. :D
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on May 04, 2015
They fit in certain slots in a special statue thing... idk what they're important for XP I just wanted to write a war story... sorry :( I stink at action/plot
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on May 04, 2015
Yes; I know that they're stones with character traits carved into them; but why are they important? Do they give the people that carry them that particular trait? What do they do?
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on May 04, 2015
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on May 04, 2015
He died!! :(( 5 i give it a 5
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Idk nut for some reason i am on my bed trembling..:((
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on April 27, 2015
I am very good at writing death scenes, for some reason XD do I have a twisted mind? XD XD
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