The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

Marbles lost everything her home, her family, her arms and wings. And at only 9 years old. Marbles has an amazing story and life.

published on January 26, 2015not completed

Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday River: Marbles! Breakfast!
Marbles: *Rushes downstairs* It's my birthday.
River: I know.
Marbles: Okay. I'm 9!
River: Nope.
Marbles: *Sits in her chair* What?
River: You're not 9 until you blow out your candles on your birthday cake.
Marbles: Oh, okay.
River: *Flops eggs on Marbles plate* Here you go! I'll be right back with your pancakes.
Marbles: Okay. *Sees pet and loudly whispers* Skittles!
Skittles: *Looks up at Marbles.* Hmm?
Marbles: Here,*Pours some eggs in Skittles food bowl.* Shh-
River: You better not be giving eggs to Skittles, Marbles! Or you'll be 8 forever!
Marbles: Yes mom.
River: *Gives Marbles pancakes*
Marbles: Yay! *Takes a bite* YUM!
River: Charles! Breakfast!
Charles: Just a minute!
River: *Rolls eyes and sits in a chair*  I never know what's up with your father these days. Every day he-he-he it seems like he doesn't care. I mean all we did, you, my mother might be right about him.
Marbles: What?
River: Nothing.
Charles: Happy Birthday! * Gives Marbles a present*
Marbles: Yay! *Opens* a teddy bear?
Charles: Yep! It's for your brother!
River: Charles, it's Marbles birthday. Owen hasn't even been born yet!
Charles: I know. It's double trouble!
Marbles: *Throws teddy bear* Oh, cool.
Charles: *Pulls out Barbie* April Fools!
Marbles: Yay!!
River: *Smiles*
Charles: *winks*
Marbles: Thank you daddy!
Charles: Your welcome.
River: Eat fast Marbles! Your party is stating soon!
Marbles: Okay!
*2 hours later*
Guests: Hello! Happy birthday!
Marbles: Hi!

Marbles and the guests party, play games, and eat. All is going great. And now it's time to blow the candles.
Everyone: Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to Marbles! Happy birthday to you!
Marbles: *Blows out candles*
*Lights go out*
*SCREAM*
Marbles: Mommy!
*SHRIEK*
Marbles: Daddy!
Mysterious man: Happy birthday Marbles. *Blows candles*
*House burns*
Marbles: *Runs out*
Mysterious man: *Grabs arm and cuts her wings and arms*
Marbles: Ow *Runs outside*

Flames and smoke light up the sky.

Marbles: *Cries* Mommy, daddy? Why, why?
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Please continue!!!!!! Its so awesome!!!!!!!
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Thank you :) And there is going to be more chapters on the way
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Yay! Your welcome!
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on December 19, 2015
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on November 18, 2015
Marble is pregnant OMG! congrats!
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on October 01, 2015
It's really so far!
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Thanks. Sorry for not making chapters in a while :p
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It's fine take your time!
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on March 07, 2015
It's really good!
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Thank ;)
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