The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 2013completed

Chapter 2: "Attacked"

The man was approaching Jack. Jack went for the bedroom, but the front door was blasted down.
The yellow eyed man confronted Jack. He had a smile on his face.
"Who are you?" Jack demanded.
"You can call me Azazel," the man replied.
Without warning, Azazel flew at Jack and hit him with a palm thrust to the chest. Jack flew across the room and hit the wall hard. He landed on the floor.
Azazel stood over Jack and pulled out a knife.
"You're next," Azazel said.
Jack began to stand up. Azazel picked him up by the throat.
Farrah came up behind Azazel and hit him with a baseball bat. The bat broke on contact.
Azazel dropped Jack and turned to Farrah. The bat didnt even effect him. He grabbed Farrah by the throat and stabbed her in the gut.
"NO!" Jack yelled.
Jack sprang up but Azazel backhanded him hard. Jack flew out the window and was knocked out.
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Jack awoke in the hospital. He realized he was in a hospital bed and he was in alot of pain. The nurse came in and walked over to him.
"Why am I here?" Jack asked.
"You and your girl were attacked last night," the nurse replied.
"Where is-"
The door opened and two men came in in suits. One white man and a black man. They asked the nurse to leave and looked at Jack.
"We need to talk," said the first man
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I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013