The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 2013completed

Chapter 8: Confrontation

Jack turned to see Azazel, the yellow-eyed demon. He looked the same as when he attacked him and Farrah.
"Azazel," Jack said. Vanessa stood up.
"Hello, Jack," Azazel replied. "It has been a while. Hows your girlfriend doing? Well she is having a marvelous time with me in Hell."
"I swear," Jack said. "I will kill you, you son of a bitch."
"you should know," Azazel told him. "I can't be killed. The most you could do is send me back to Hell. I'll just come back."
"No Azazel," Jack said. "I will find a way to kill you."
"You cant win Jack," Azazel told him. "No one has ever killed a demon. Soon, though, you are going to have bigger problems than me."
"What do you mean?" Jack demanded.
"Very soon," Azazel explained. "I will open a very special portal to Hell. Where our lord Lucifer will be released from his chamber."
"The devil?" Jack asked.
"Thats not nice to say, Jack," Azazel said. "Well, see you around, Jack. I have work to do."
Azazel vanished. Jack and Vanessa were shocked... They didnt know what to do.
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I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013