Lost City of Atlantis

Lost City of Atlantis

This action packed story is full of surprises. When Western European senior Mark Skuldmen and his 2 best friends Millan Cooper and Sarah Waters finish school for the summer they go on a trip oversees using Mark's dad's ship and when they go diving beneath the ocean they discover something extraordinary and undiscovered to mankind.

published on November 10, 2012completed

The Finding

The Finding Day 1 had gone by and it was a restless night. No one could get any sleep with the noise of the waves crashing down and everything else they heard at night. Sarah pulled out her navigation system and started using it. "According to this system we are in the Atlantic right now guys." "Oooooh ATLANTIC!" Millan said in a sarcastic tone. "Hey I thought we were done with that?!!" "With what, this? Hey this is just Millan being Millan, Sarah besides it was part of our deal that nothing changed. Not me, not you things just stayed the same between us and there was no tension between us." Millan whispered. "No! apart of our deal was that you would start being nicer Mill!" "Yeah and it was also apart of our deal to not call me that anymore!" "No! that was a favor you asked of me! come on Millan I'm sorry if you thought it was a favor but unless you don't want Mark to tell everyone that you were jealous of little miss Pigface as soon as I tell him, then shut up stuge!" "Alright whatever! I'm going diving anyway!" Millan called. "Ooooh count me in bro! Mark yelled as he dove deep inside the water. Watch my stuff will you?" "Yeah sure Mark." replied. "You coming in? Its a long way down?" Asked Mark. "Nah maybe later." "Dude, don't worry about her lets have fun I'm going deep! we got our diving equipment there should be no problems. Oh and this water completely shark free." Millan detailed. "Yeah I think I'll just go back up with Sarah but have fun man." "You have got to be kidding me!" Millan said to himself in a loud voice. When Mark got back up Sarah was reading a book she brought from home. "What happened?" She asked. "Nothin' just thought I'd stay up here with you for a bit." "Come on Mill wants to have fun with you go have some fun Mark you don't have to be so boring like me you know so go ahead! come on Mark." "Al-alright." He said as he dived back deep in the water. Millan was going deeper and deeper into the water until he finally realized he had to of been at least 5o feet bellow the surface but he didn't care he followed the orange fish that were traveling in groups. As soon as he saw Mark come inside the water and finally reach 49 feet he went back up a little bit to go get Mark. "Hey bro." He said to him. "sup man why are you going so deep?" "Don't know and don't care." "Come on we gotta go back up alright." No. I'm sorry but I'm tired of you always choosing sides between me and Sarah so you go back up." "Alright I will! Just afraid you might die out here its too deep bro not this time you can have your way next time!" "No!" Millan yelled and just kept going deeper. As Millan got deeper and deeper the water got clearer. "This isn't safe!" Mark called out but was barely heard because his swim mask didn't allow him to be able to yell or the mask would of fell off him. Millan saw nothing but amazement in his eyes. As he swam deeper he could swear he saw a statue of a girl or a mermaid. "Wow... what the hell?" He could of swarn he had saw a a whole city even. It looked almost like Greece and he had been to Greece before many times from the time he was little. "Look here bro." He called out to Mark but he seemed to of been not listening. "Mark!" "What?!!!" Mark replied. "Come see this." Mark swam deeper and cried out "Its not safe!!!!!" "No come on man." Mark listened and he saw it he saw it he saw.... The Lost City of Atlantis. "Wooooooow." He said. Soon Millan's tank started to run out of oxygen quicker than expected. "Bro?, bro! I'm almost out of oxygen!" "We have to go back Millan! Its not worth it! You'll die out here its too deep for us to be going deeper we need to get back to the surface before your tank runs out come on!" And it was at that moment forward that Millan knew what a true friend was. It was Mark.
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