The Alcohol

Just a poem I came up with last night at Eleven when I was tired. So it may not be good, but I will re-edit it in the future when I get things straightened out. Also, I wanted to give a shout out to my best friend Anthony (WWEChampion20) for liking my poem and thinking it was great! Thanks Ant! =)

HellRaiserPrincess published on March 20, 2013completed

The Alcohol

I came up with this poem last night at eleven, when I couldn't sleep. Last night was a long night for me. =/ But hey, this poem may not be good...yet, but I will make some edits to it in the near future. Hope you guys like it. Enjoy!

The alcohol is in my system
The music is blaring loud
My body is acting crazy
As I start to see strange clouds

The alcohol is taking over my system
And the smell of smoke fills my nostrils
I take in the toxicating smell
Now my body is in control

The alcohol is a drug,
I'm now obsessed with it
I must not have more
Before I fully begin to loose it.

But I just can't have enough
It's so addicting.
The taste is ravishing
I feel the pleasure beginning.

The pleasure is a rush
Now the pain is pounding in my head.
Hopefully the pain will erase
When I collapse on my bed.

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