The Immortals (1)

The Immortals (1)

Four Immortals have to fight that of a god. However with each people species past, this could prove to be a challenge.

published on May 06, 2016not completed

History at it's best

Vaslet slammed his blade onto Raiden's shield. Raiden, under the sheer force, was sent back, not falling just sliding. Vaslet made chase and swung his blade at him. Raiden blocked it with his shield. "You were one for aggression!" He pushed Vaslet's blade aside, using his shield.
"And you were one to be a dick!" Vaslet sent a punch to the prince's face. Staggering him. Vaslet sent his sword for the Prince, who again blocked it with his shield. Raiden finally retaliated sending his sword towards Vaslet in a thrust motion. Vaslet just gripped the blade with his gauntlet, holding it in place. "You were also one to underestimate me" Vaslet headbutted Raiden with a fair deal of force, knocking him back.
"Why do it Vaslet?" Raiden recovered, raising his sword in front of him, pointing the tip at Vaslet. "Why kill my farther?"
"For the last time, you little twit" Vaslet looked up with fire in his eyes. "I DIDN'T KILL HIM! We were like brothers you and I! We fought together, grew up together, you WERE my true family! Remember that? I was always denied because I wasn't strong enough! You met me on the field! Remember the Orcs? You and me holding 100 Orcs in a valley? We where strong together! BUT NO! You're farther, a farther to me, was killed...AND I WAS GIVEN THE BLAME! BY ONE I CALLED A BROTHER! WHY WOULD I KILL HIM?" Vaslet's blade ignited in fire. "It was us against the world! And now...It's me against you...Bro" Vaslet went head on towards Raiden, who was slightly put off by Vaslet's words. However in Vaslet's anger, he saw carelessness. Dodging his blade with a backstep.
"Vaslet..." Raiden slammed his foot on Vaslet's blade. "You never claimed to be innocent, you never defended him, you never mourned...You forget who was the best of us all those years, you wouldn't be alive without me...I'M GOING TO END YOU!" Raiden, threw his shield and sword aside. "SLOWLY!" He sent a lightning struck fist to Vaslet's face, making his let go of his sword. Sending another two to Vaslet's chest, staggering him. "PAINFULLY!" He elbowed him in the stomach, giving him no time to recover. "AND WITH VENGEANCE!" Sending a single powerful punch to Vaslet's face, this struck him with lightning. Vaslet's went flying into pillar, which then landed on him. "I know all your moves, I hope you die under there..." Raiden turned, his cape fluttering slightly. He stopped, hearing struggling. He turned to see Vaslet, holding the pillar above his head. In his hands, no help. He stood upright and looked right at Raiden.
Vaslet just stood there holding this 15 foot pillar in his hands, above his head. "Unlucky for you...I had 1000 years to work on some new ones" A small drip off blood came from his nose. "YOU THINK I DIDN'T MOURN HIM? TRY TO DEFEND HIM? You locked me up Raiden...I'm going...To...DESTROY YOU!" He threw the pillar at Raiden, who reacted and struck it with lightning, exploding it. He wasn't ready for what came next. Vaslet came running through some ruble, punching through it and hitting Raiden in the face. It was just a normal punch but it sent Raiden flying back. He recovered and got to his feet. Vaslet came running right after him. Raiden held his palms out and threw two lightning blots at him. Vaslet held up with gauntlets. These just absorbed the lightning. Vaslet jumped, the distance of the jump took him right to Raiden, earning Raiden a powerful punch to the face.
Raiden got up from the second punch, looking at Vaslet, noticing something. "How, you were locked up? How did you get that much stronger, you even look bigger"
Vaslet was slowly walking down the huge hallway. "All the 2 hour sessions I had free. All I did was train...And what do you know? After 1000 years of slow training...I'm badder than ever!" Vaslet, went running at Raiden. Sending a powerful kick to his face, which was fire ignited. Exploding in Raiden face the kick knocked him unconscious. "You f*cked up...You f*cked up"

-Back at the camera room-
Collette had easily blocked Marissa attempted to hit her. However Marissa sent a bit of ice from the blade at Collette, who moved back and used the other sword the smash the ice with ease. They both backed off. "GOD DAM YOU WATER DANCER'S!" Marissa yelled.
"What, you started a war you could never win" Collette laughed.
"Did we? Says the one...Who lost the war" Marissa smiled and went running at Collette. Who was pissed off by the last comment. She sent her blade in a thrust motion to Marissa. Marissa parried her attack with her rapier. However forgot about her second blade. which now coming right for her. Marissa quickly summon an ice shield to block the attack. The blade hit the shield and bounced off. They both backed off again. They were both warriors of one on one dueling, this was custom to them. They both ran at each other. Marissa took a early thrust at Collette, who thought she was going mad. That was until an ice spike came her way. She slashed her blade across the ground, the summoned some water to come up like a wave. It blocked the ice but froze. Marissa almost knew she would do this, she smashed through the ice, charging Collette. Collette blocked the basic thrust the sent the handle of her blade to Marissa stomach. She then kneed her in the face, sending her back. Marissa's nose bleed slightly. Collette smiled and spun her scimitars into upright position. She started spinning, her motions where swift and fast. However Marissa just rolled her eyes and froze the ground below Collette. This put her off and she mess spun out of control and nearly fell over. Marissa grabber her with her hand that once had a shield. She then slowly started to freeze her neck. Collette, gasped for air a second. But soon she regained composer. She made a huge whirlpool under Marissa. Who sank and let go of Collette. Who smiled and made a waved come from it. It sent Marissa up in the air. Collette then shot another large wave from behind her. This hit Marissa hard and sent her in the control panel. Which was now fired.
"You FrozenStorms never did learn" Collette walked over, slamming one blade into Marissa sleeve to stop her from moving. "Now I have to kill you"
Marissa smiled, almost welcoming death. "Fine...Do it, he's free, I'm not needed"
"Gladly" Collette sent the other blade towards her head. Marissa flinched...But nothing happened. She opened her eyes to see the blade a centimeter above her head. Collette's arm was being held by someone. Collette looked beside her...Vaslet stood there, still having fire in his eyes. He grabbed Collette by the neck and threw her towards the opening of the room. She slid on her bum and back, loosing her blades.
Vaslet looked at her as she got up. "You Dancers claim to be good one on one" He raised his fists igniting them with fire. "So...Let's see what you got lady"
Collette smiled and poised herself, one arm near her face, the other down low by her hip. "You may be stronger, but I know how to use your strength against you"
"You look like you should know that. I guess I'll have to see if a Dancer is better alone than in an army" Vaslet said coldly. "I can see the fear in your eyes"
"You're the most feared man in the kingdoms...Even I can't hide the small fear I have of you" Collette said ashamed.
"I'm a nice guy really. Besides, I'm not at 100% yet" Vaslet said, almost easing her.
They both ran right for each other...
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*bungee jumps off of the cliff hanger* Weeeeeeeee~
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-Holds up a sign with a 6 on it-
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on May 15, 2016
God damn it! the cliff hangers! *cuts saftey net and jumps off* XD
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Idk weather to make these chapters like 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 words long just to stop this.
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*waves* X3
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on May 15, 2016
K byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyye XD
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on May 15, 2016
^.^ heehee *lands at the bottom of the cliff* i don't mind, it's nice down here :3
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on May 15, 2016
Sometimes I feel like Collette is the most hated....
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I swear every time I write a story and it's not 100% perfect to you. Because you charterer doesn't have enough scenes of losses one fight. You moan. It's easy just to kill them off. It only take a chapter.
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No no no it's fine. Just say if you want me to just get rid of the story or you charterer. Coz I'll only write another just loose a part. Don't take it back. If you feel that way go for it. Idc.
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on May 15, 2016
......
I take back what I said!
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on May 15, 2016
How? She isn't. Collette and Marissa just haven't had much shown about them because it has been based around Vaslet and Raiden. Mainly Vaslet. You don't what's to come.
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on May 15, 2016
*bounces on the safety net* ^.^ heehee
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Plus, end of the forth chapter is full of feels :-O
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Ikr?
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on May 14, 2016
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on May 14, 2016
Andddd another cliffhanger *falls again*
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God dam it Sapphire!
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on May 13, 2016
*falls off the cliffhanger* heehee, great story!!!
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on May 12, 2016
I swear, I'm already loving it!
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Glad so.
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Haha thanks.
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on May 08, 2016
It deserve really five stars and two thumbs-up.???????
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on May 08, 2016
... don't tell me you just instantly killed me off.
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Are you dead?
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Clearly didn't read the description.
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on May 08, 2016
Yeah I get the feeling I might....
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on May 08, 2016
"Tried to block it"*
ALMOST, CLIFFHANGER.
So no I did not instantly kill you off. Coz you are alive.
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on May 08, 2016
You left it on a cliffhanger where they almost killed me.
And "tried to dodge it"?
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