Take Me Too

Take Me Too

Oliver is a lost soul, roaming the earth, searching for a way out. Until he falls for a human girl, Amanda. She soon dies from a terminal illness, and taking her to heaven is his assignment. On the way there he truly knows that he wants to go to heaven too. But they have to find his body and rid of all revenge on his murderer: his older sister, Kylie. Will he be able to do it in time before the clock runs out? Keep reading.

published on September 25, 2020not completed

Abandoned

Abandoned
~•Amanda's POV•~
Ever since I got diagnosed with cancer 7 months ago, my world turned upside down. I just felt so alone. Coughing up blood and none able to do anything to help me sucked. I'm in so much pain I can barely use the bathroom by myself. Mom and dad argue a lot. My baby brother crying all the time
What did I do to deserve this? I needed to take a walk. I sneak out my house and start walking. I can't help but feel somebody's watching me. Or following me. I've felt like this a lot. It started about a year ago right before my diagnosis. I brush it off as nothing and continue to walk towards the abandoned part of town. Not completely abandoned. Families that can t afford to move away from this part of town still live here.
I continue to walk as the sun goes down. Children playing outside and laughing and chasing each other. I remember when I had the energy to do that. I need to rest, so I walk into an abandoned building. I walk up the stairs and I sit down next to a pile of debris. I took a deep breath and relaxed for a bit. It started to get darker outside, so I turned my phone flashlight on. I looked around. The debris was set up strategically and there were melted candles around it.  
My white girl senses were tingling so I decide to take a look. And I don't see a homeless man sleep. I see a rotted corpse. Dried blood everywhere. I scream and call 9-1-1. I run outside the building, trying to catch my breath. Tears flowing down my face. I can't believe this is happening.
As help arrived, I was sitting in a ball, still crying my eyes out. A policeman was talking to me. I tried to answer his questions the best I could. "I just found it there." Was all I could say. As my mom ran up to me, sobbing, she hugged me. I pushed her away. I use all my energy running away from the corpse. I just want to go home.
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