Take Me Too

Take Me Too

Oliver is a lost soul, roaming the earth, searching for a way out. Until he falls for a human girl, Amanda. She soon dies from a terminal illness, and taking her to heaven is his assignment. On the way there he truly knows that he wants to go to heaven too. But they have to find his body and rid of all revenge on his murderer: his older sister, Kylie. Will he be able to do it in time before the clock runs out? Keep reading.

published on September 25, 2020not completed

Broken

Broken
We arrive at the movies and Luke opens the door and pays for the tickets like the "true gentleman he is".  I, either way, get a free movie. When we get in the theater, I sit on the back of Amanda's chair. After the previews and the theater gets dark as the movie starts, Luke puts his hand on her thigh. She brushes it off, but he puts it back. A little higher this time. She whispered in his ear, "Please stop." But he refuses to listen.
I was enraged I just wanted to kill him. But before I could start thinking of ways to do that, the movie ends. Time does go by fast when you're dead. After we get back to the car, we just sit there. He then says, "I like you a lot." She gave him a tooth smile and says back, "I really like you too, Luke." They then kiss. Her first kiss, and it wasn't me. I was sad. I just sit in the back seat and sulk when I hear her say, "Don't."
"Come on baby, I'm just trying to have fun." He says. He then gropes her. Every time she tries to push him off, his grip tightens. And before I could do anything, it was too late. He had stolen something so precious to her. He did something that would traumatize her and he broke her. And all I could do was .. watch. Because if I did something to him, that means I'd be hurting her worse. He quickly dropped her on the doorstep, and without saying goodbye with tears streaming down her face she ran inside. I did my best to keep up with her.
Her mom tries to stop her but she just ignores her and locks us in the bathroom. She starts the shower. She strips and she jumps in, crying and scrubbing herself until her skin was red and she was bleeding. She threw her clothes in the trash and she goes to her room, locking us inside. Her mother's weak attempts to get her to open up. But it was too late. She was already broken.
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