Take Me Too

Take Me Too

Oliver is a lost soul, roaming the earth, searching for a way out. Until he falls for a human girl, Amanda. She soon dies from a terminal illness, and taking her to heaven is his assignment. On the way there he truly knows that he wants to go to heaven too. But they have to find his body and rid of all revenge on his murderer: his older sister, Kylie. Will he be able to do it in time before the clock runs out? Keep reading.

published on September 25, 2020not completed

The Girl

The Girl I  saw her walking to  school and I felt shivers down my ghostly spine. She was gorgeous. I followed her to school. I know she couldn't feel it, but I could. I didn't want it to be true. She will die soon.
I followed her to a group of people who happened to be her friends. I followed her inside the school. And I sat on her desk, watching her. I have learned that her name is Amanda Sterling. Wow. If only she could see me. But I bet she doesn't wanna see the gaping hole in my throat. Her lips... I leaned towards her and touched her. She shivered.
Then a note landed on her desk through me. Rude. It was from someone named Luke. It had a heart on it. She blushed. Jealousy shot through me. Why do I have to be dead?! "I WANT HER!!! SHE'S MINE!!!" I yell. But, of course, nobody heard me. She giggled quietly when she opened it.
It read: 'Hey, wanna go out tonight? Pick you up at 7?' She smiled. She wrote back, 'Of course.' She handed it back to him. He smiled. I walk over to him and stuck my hand in his head. He passed out.
His head hit his desk so hard, he started bleeding. "That's what you get, bastard." Then I sat quietly on Amanda's desk as everyoone around me started to freak out.
I smiled.
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