IDEA!
Okay, let's face it. This story is awful.I had an idea like two minutes ago. How about I give up on this story (I'll probably finish it another time) and start a different one based on this amazing song?
I'm thinking about the 5SOS song I've Got This Friend. For those of you who don't know, it's actually a lot like Heartbreak Girl. The boys are singing to this girl who is like their best friend, and they like her, and they're saying that they have a friend who likes her, and in the end they admit that it's them. It's a beautiful song.
What do you think? Come on, this story isn't good. I think I've Got This Friend would be much better, since it's like Heartbreak Girl and Heartbreak Girl wasn't a complete fail.
If you want, I can just continue with this. But if I was doing I've Got This Friend, I'd come back to this eventually.
I just thought of this: How about I write a few chapters of I've Got This Friend, and you see which you prefer? PLEASE COMMENT YOUR OPINIONS!
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Name: Jen
Age: 63
She is: Calum's grandmother
She is very sweet to everyone, and does generous acts of kindness. For example, she made a really delicious cake for Calum and the other 5sos boys, for after one of their concerts. Her hobbies include knitting, sewing, reading, and puzzles. Plus she's a wonderful cook!
Name: Lindsey
Age: same as others
Personality: funny, talkative, sarcastic, outgoing
Hobbies: art related stuff, writing, meeting new friends See More
Who is she: ally's bff