Try Hard

Try Hard

One girl. Four boys. They will all compete to win the girl's attention - but do they end up trying too hard each time? A 5 Seconds of Summer fan fiction. Though you don't need to know who they are to understand it! ;)

published on July 11, 2014not completed

Prologue (Luke's P.O.V.)

Prologue (Luke's P.O.V.) "This next one is called Try Hard!" I call out to the crowd of screaming fans.
As we start to play, I remember our inspiration for this song. Well, how could I forget her? Not only was the the reason we wrote Try Hard, but she was the girl who changed our lives - and nearly tore the band apart.

Beautiful, but deadly.

A/N: To my new readers, welcome! To my Heartbreak Girl readers, welcome back! :D

Hello! Thank you for taking the time to read this story of mine. I really hope that you will enjoy it! :D :D


For the Heartbreak Girl readers: I'm thinking about doing the teaser thing again. Should I? And if you have any questions, feel free to ask! :D
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WOOHOO MORE'S FINALLY OUT!!!
NOW WRITE MORE!!!
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on August 11, 2014
WRRRRREIIIIITTTEEEE MMMOOOORRFEEEE
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on August 08, 2014
Thx 4 updating!
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Aw you're lovely!! :D I'm so sorry that I didn't update for ages though!!!
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on August 07, 2014
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on August 06, 2014
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED A HAPPY ENDING FOR LUREN NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on July 31, 2014
I'm good either way
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on July 19, 2014
It sounds like a great idea, as long as there's Luren! I like this story, but that fic sounds great!
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Thanks!! :D I'll make a poll about it now!
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
That sounds like a good idea Ari.
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Thank you!! :D
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
Write more soooln
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I won't be able to update tomorrow, Sunday or Monday.
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
OMG I felt so bad reading that chapter! Poor Luke!!!!! :((
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I know! :((
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Thank you so much!! :D I feel like this story is so bad though... :(
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on July 18, 2014
It's a good chapter in writing though! Super descriptive!
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
WRITE MOOREEEEE
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on July 15, 2014
Omigod I'M GOING TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(( :(( :(( :(( I ship Luren so much, FIX THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(( :(( :(( :(( Other than that, you're a really good writer!
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It's okay!
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Haha!! :D
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on July 15, 2014
Maybe it is! Well along with Percabeth, Romione, Aryagon, Keeta, Jiper, Fourtris, Hinny, Rorina, Nasuatagh, Luville, and other ship names!
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on July 15, 2014
Haha, it's like Luren is one of your favourite words!! :D
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on July 15, 2014
Forever and ever! LUREN LUREN LUREN
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on July 15, 2014
We're still Luren shipping buddies, right??
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on July 15, 2014
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on July 15, 2014
:(( Your *sniff sniff :((* welcome.
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Aw, sorry!! :((
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on July 15, 2014
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on July 15, 2014
Aw, thanks!! :D
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on July 15, 2014
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on July 15, 2014
Awesome!!!! Write more soon!
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on July 14, 2014
AWWWW SO CUTE!!!!!!!!
I AM TOTALLY INTO THIS!!!
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Thank you so much!! :D
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Np! :D
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
This is my OC:
Name: Jen
Age: 63
She is: Calum's grandmother

She is very sweet to everyone, and does generous acts of kindness. For example, she made a really delicious cake for Calum and the other 5sos boys, for after one of their concerts. Her hobbies include knitting, sewing, reading, and puzzles. Plus she's a wonderful cook!
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I hope she can be in the story!! Sorry that she's probably a weird character...
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I do like your idea! :D I would have never thought of creating a character like her!! :D
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on July 17, 2014
You really think so?? :d I just thought it might be interesting to include an older relative of his...:) I hope you really do like my idea....
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on July 17, 2014
Oh, no, it's okay!! :D She's different, and that's really cool!!
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on July 13, 2014
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on July 13, 2014
Cool!! :D
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on July 13, 2014
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on July 13, 2014
Can I have an OC?
Name: Lindsey
Age: same as others
Personality: funny, talkative, sarcastic, outgoing
Hobbies: art related stuff, writing, meeting new friends See More
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I'll include her when I can! :D
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on July 13, 2014
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on July 12, 2014
Awesome! I loved Heartbreak Girl, I'm glad you're writing more! Continue with the teasers, and if you accept OC's than you already know my info!
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Thank you so much!! :D And are you saying she would be Ally's best friend?
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You can choose what Dawn is.
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on July 12, 2014
You can change who she is if you want, because you guys won't be finding out much about Ally...
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on July 12, 2014
You can decide.
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 11, 2014
Awesome!!!!
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Thank you!! :D :D
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on July 11, 2014