Shades of Sanity

Shades of Sanity

A short story about a person in a coma slowly waking up. I wrote this at midnight, and it's a tad poetic and deviant from my usual style, but I think it turned out okay. Enjoy~!

published on May 05, 2017completed

Orange

Outside of this wo
Rld there
Are other colors, other feeli
Ngs, other people, but in this
Game
Everything is
Orange and it's d
Riving me ins
Ane will someo
Ne please help me
Gain consciousn
Ess
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THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ ON HERE OH MY GOD YOU DESERVE A BILLION DOLLARS
SERIOUSLY THIS IS SO GOOD !!
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Oh my god, you seriously think so? Thank you so much!!
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:D :D
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on May 20, 2017
No problem again!! :) :D
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on May 20, 2017
Oh my god. I cannot thank you enough. I'm so flattered. :0
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on May 20, 2017
nO PROBLEM!! But seriously, you should get this PUBLISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!

It is literally my favorite short story I've EVER read. SERIOUSLY!!!
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on May 20, 2017
Wow! Thank you!!!
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on May 20, 2017
I DO!!! THIS IS LEGITIMATELY AMAZING!!!! !NO PROBLEM!!!!
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on May 20, 2017
Wow, this really gave off the 'jumbled thoughts' vibe.
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Awesome! That's what I was going for. Thank you!
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on May 06, 2017
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on May 05, 2017
thats awesome!
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Thank you so much!
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