unforbidden love

unforbidden love

a boy dies and yeah sorry i dont feel like putting a description so just read i promise u will love this story

published on March 07, 2013completed

the strangers

the strangers
you probably dont know this but ...being a ghost is freaking boring! i mean yeah you watch all those shows saying you can scare people but man this really sucks rats ass. so pretty much all i do is just watch the cars go by and sleep. :/.
  i woke up to a mans voice. yawning i looked through the window and saw a bob's moving van. (really bob thats kind of a boring name). well if you dont know what the means then you must be dumb. A family of three were moving in to my house or i guess their house now. i hid behind the door forgetting that they could not see me. "raven you'll love it here trust me." from a voice im assuming was the mom. "yeah right mom im pretty sure who ever lived here was a criminal i mean look at all the beer bottles!" she yelled back. i wasnt really paying attention to what she was saying. i dont why but when i saw her just everything bad in my life just seemed to disapear. she was hot. and for a second..what am i thinking? how can a dead person think a girl is attractive. well she was though. she had black hair  and a leather jacket on .damn she was everything..to me anyway. but when i finally got back in the world and not fantasy land my eyes wandered around the house looking for her. aha! there she was. now dont call me a stalker or a perv but i was watching her do everything for over a month and that was the only thing to keep my entertained. but there was something odd within this girl that i just couldnt quite understand about her. it was but in a good way..mysterious
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write more please !!!
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on July 19, 2013
Really good
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on June 21, 2013
thx and im working on it
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on March 16, 2013
Please write more. This is a REALLY good story.
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on March 16, 2013
Please continue the story
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on March 11, 2013
this is my first story ever so if u want me to continue making the story please say so and i will publish the rest of it
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on March 07, 2013