Do you understand?

Do you understand?

This is about different thoughts that's been running through my head, and I guess I've just made them into a story. I'd appreciate it if you didn't leave any abusive comments as these stories were written in dedication to people who I love so dearly but have passed away...

published on February 23, 2013not completed

I miss you

I miss you uncle Fraser
my bright and shining star
you may think we've forgotten about you
but I wonder where you are
how is heaven treating you?
are you fine and well?
if you could
would you contact us
would ring our little bell?
after years
four of them
the people you knew have changed
for all sorts of reasons
because things haven't been the same
since you left
the world has changed
and people lost and blind
it's true what I said
you are truly
our bright and shining star
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on November 22, 2017
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on February 07, 2014
it deep and moving
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on November 13, 2013
:)
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on September 30, 2013
So touching :((
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on September 28, 2013
:) nice
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on September 21, 2013
Thank you
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on March 01, 2013
okay
it was good
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on February 28, 2013
Rayne used to be my friend, I just wrote she was my best friend because I thought she would be but she wasn't. The 2nd one was about my Granny Hodge. Did you like it? If you did, leave a nice comment please : )
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on February 27, 2013
and who is the 2nd one about
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on February 27, 2013
It sounds like the first one is about me but you said it was raine but she dont live a minute away and was nevwer your best friend
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on February 27, 2013
thanx
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on February 23, 2013
please make more.I LOVED THE STORY!
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on February 23, 2013
* So not Sp
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on February 23, 2013
:') Sp touching.
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on February 23, 2013
love the story :)
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on February 23, 2013