Fighting part 3

Fighting part 3

hehehe i am making this peom in to a story its a good thing to its gonna be a good story the other parts have been post lolzzzz

published on February 22, 2013completed

BOMBS AWAY

BOMBS AWAY Dear Momma and Daddy
Its been hard but wew are almost thorugh I meet my friend from home town
remeber the friend that moved well he is here momma when i get  home Imma show
you him okay I'll be home soon
                                               -Love Lilly Bug

After this search we will be done Says GENERAL
in a whisper Lilly says WE will be done thats good

YEa it is says her friend (Genral)
well thats good cuse this food is nasty she says
I know right says Jerry
Yea we all know you too are the ones who always say Nasty food Says the her friend                          
Yea I know right they both say at the same time (jerry and Lilly)
Yea okay He says her freind

They reach the area and there is a tunnel they have to go thourgh

Imma go in first to see if it has any bombs okay if it blows up do not come in for me do not GO IN THERE DO U HEAR ME says Genral
YES SIR says EVERYONE

Before he goes he comes by lilly and says
Lilly bug whats wrong
WHY CANT I GO IF IT BLOWS UP she yells
BECAUSE .....U can't get hurt I can't let u Lilly bug he said
A tear rolls down her eye
Lilly bug don't cry he says
Hush lubomir she says before I say it
I wish u would he says
Okay u said u wish love bug she says

He smiles Lilly he says
Yes what is it she says
I... I will tell u when it's all over he. Says
He turns to Jerry and whisper Make sure she doesn't run in there if it  blows he says
OK I'll make sure he says  ,(Jerry)
Lubomir walks in the tunnel and starts to search as he walks back Lilly sees the bomb and when she is about to yell GET OUT OF THERE it blows up
NOOOO LUBOMIR SHE YELLS she starts to run but Jerry catchs her and says
Lilly u can't
LET ME GO SHE YELL
u can't go in there Lilly stop he says
NO LUBOMIR SHE starts to loose her breathe
Jerry let's her go then she sees that as her chance and she starts to run in the tunnel Jerry sees her and try to stop her but she already in the tunnel
WELL BE BACK
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Very creative and very unique!!
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on April 05, 2013
Well I'll stick to writing poems l lolzz: P
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on March 19, 2013