Feeling Good

EXPLICIT CONTENT!!! for middle school students and up (it's a good story though)

published on May 13, 2014not completed

Chapter 2

Rihanna scrambled out of her bikini and wrapped a towel around her boobs. It went down barely below her crotch. Se finished this right before the doorbell rang.
“Be right there!” said Rihanna in her sexiest voice
she raced over to the door and opened it. Asher was still wearing only a bathing suit.
“Hey…” she said
“Hi!” Asher didn’t even try to hide his excitement
“Come in!” Rihanna lead Asher over to her bed. “Have a seat.”
“I’m sorry if I interrupted you, I mean, You’re not even dressed!”
“That was the Idea, Yes…” Asher opened his mouth, then closed it again
“What did you want to talk to me about?”
“Hun, I think we all know when I meant by that.”
“Yeah…”
Rihanna placed her hand on Ashers chest “Did you know what I meant?”
“Yeah”
“Do you mind?”
“Not at all.”
Rihanna smiled “Good.” She untied the towel and let it fall to the floor “Hey!” she said, “I feel awkward! If you know what I mean…”
“I know exactly what you mean.”
“May I?”
“Yeah…”
Rihanna brought her hands down to the waistline of Ashers swimsuit. She tugged a little and brought her hands to the drawstring. She took a deep breath as the bow came undone and the swimsuit came down to Ashers ankles. Rihanna stared.  “Wow...”
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yes please!!!!
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on May 26, 2014
Please add more
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on May 26, 2014
tbh i didnt realise incorrect punctuation cuz im not the b!tchy punctuation police in stories but good story ;) continue lol...
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on May 24, 2014
ya i'm aware... and it doesn't really sound weird
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on May 13, 2014
I like how it's detailed. {if that doesn't sound weird for what type of book it is}
Not trying to sound rude, but I see some mis-spells and some incorrect puncuation. Just wanted to make you aware if you wanna fix that. (:
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on May 13, 2014