Illusion

Ok so this is supposed to be a horror story, my first time writing something like this. Also it is a choose your own fate story. Please do not read it in order of chapters as it won't make any sense then,Sorry if chapters are short and please do not get angry if you die, you can always try again. Also I am planning to maybe make this into a game or book so please do not copy. Thanks ^.^

published on July 20, 2014not completed

Chapter 7.

You sprint down the corridor and you here something else above all the screaming of help whisper we're coming for you.."You ignore it getting scratched and cut but you make it, you are now in a room with three doors. There is a plaque with words written with..blood?. You look at the doors, the first door is black with a red ruby, obviously leading to hell, the second door was a brilliant gold, with intricate designs and patterns that looking like a gateway, the gateway to heaven you thought.You looked at the last door was simple wood and would probably take you back to the mansion.You sigh and read the plaque.
'Three doors each one unique
One to heaven,one to hell
The third back to the house
Will you live or die
Only time will tell
So the question is
What door will you take?'
1. If you choose door 1 go to chapter 9
2. If you choose door 2 go to chapter 10
3. If you choose door 3 go to chapter 11
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Whoa! I just read the whole story and I am still alive :D
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on November 22, 2014
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For those who liked Illusion so far..
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Okay
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on November 05, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
Still alive :p
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on August 08, 2014
I wont post the next chapters until I have written more,
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on July 23, 2014
I'M STILL ALIVE
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on July 22, 2014
Awesome!
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I haven't died yet :)
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Were survivirs!!!
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on July 23, 2014
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on July 22, 2014
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on July 22, 2014
PLEASE UPDATE
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Sorry I was out for most of the day but I will update ASAP
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 21, 2014
There isn't chapter 11 so far I'm good!
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on July 20, 2014
So far i'm still alive!!!!
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Congrats!
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:D i'm a survivor
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
I died when I chose to go back outside.
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Well you can always try again ^.^
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Yep!
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
So when i finish if you did get Game over please say how many tries it took you to survive. I will try to update in 3's and i currently have about.. 11 chapters.
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on July 20, 2014
I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this so far! :D
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on July 20, 2014
Awesome! I love these kinds of stories
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on July 20, 2014
Like i said this is my first time, i was thinking about this last night but i dont think turned out as well as i wanted it too..this was more of a scrap story..
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on July 20, 2014