Illusion

Ok so this is supposed to be a horror story, my first time writing something like this. Also it is a choose your own fate story. Please do not read it in order of chapters as it won't make any sense then,Sorry if chapters are short and please do not get angry if you die, you can always try again. Also I am planning to maybe make this into a game or book so please do not copy. Thanks ^.^

published on July 20, 2014not completed

Chapter 11.

You walk through the wooden door, hell was not a option- you would die- and heaven also meant you would die to get there, You didn't want to go back to the mansion but it was better then those two. You walk through and are now at a pool? It looks like a deep pit of dark dark water and you cant see the bottom. You see another door at the other side and you begin to walk towards it when something pulls you into the water. Its deep and you cant see a thing due to the darkness of it, You realize it was impossible to swim through this yet you try anyways, All that happens is your flailing your arms helplessly trying to stay above the water.
What do you do?
1. Keep trying (go to chapter 12)
2. Just give in(go to chapter (13)
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Whoa! I just read the whole story and I am still alive :D
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on November 22, 2014
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For those who liked Illusion so far..
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Okay
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on November 05, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
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on November 04, 2014
Still alive :p
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on August 08, 2014
I wont post the next chapters until I have written more,
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on July 23, 2014
I'M STILL ALIVE
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on July 22, 2014
Awesome!
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I haven't died yet :)
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Were survivirs!!!
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on July 23, 2014
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on July 22, 2014
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on July 22, 2014
PLEASE UPDATE
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Sorry I was out for most of the day but I will update ASAP
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 21, 2014
There isn't chapter 11 so far I'm good!
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on July 20, 2014
So far i'm still alive!!!!
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Congrats!
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:D i'm a survivor
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on July 21, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
I died when I chose to go back outside.
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Well you can always try again ^.^
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Yep!
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
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on July 20, 2014
So when i finish if you did get Game over please say how many tries it took you to survive. I will try to update in 3's and i currently have about.. 11 chapters.
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on July 20, 2014
I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this so far! :D
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on July 20, 2014
Awesome! I love these kinds of stories
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on July 20, 2014
Like i said this is my first time, i was thinking about this last night but i dont think turned out as well as i wanted it too..this was more of a scrap story..
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on July 20, 2014