Dog stories

Dog stories

I come up with lots of short stories and here are the doggiest ones. Lots of them are funny Some are sad but i swear they are great.

published on February 20, 2013not completed

Aprils dog Jock.

Aprils dog Jock.
I was 5 when April got Jock.
April was my best friend but was known for bad animal care.
Last year her cat Sooty got hit by a car and her gerbil Dave got squashed by a plate on the same day!
Well Jock was a Scottish terrier cross Labrador who loved to play.
I loved him dearly and called at Aprils everyday to walk him.
But April soon got bored of dogs and said "I am not coming out today.You walk him..."
I did'nt mind until she did it everyday.
One day I decided to bring Jock to my house for some dinner because he was thin looking.
But April bounded over and said "Leave him be!" and threw him into the road.
I screamed as a bus and a motorbike collided and crushed the dog.
I ran of crying and never saw April until I was 14.
She had been in Africa for years but now has come back.
She looked at my lovely Husky Anka and sighed as she scuttled off.
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on April 02
Cool ideas!:)
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on August 10, 2016
WOW! I LOVE IT!:D
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on July 09, 2016
its ok
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on July 22, 2015
'Tis okay good... B)
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on July 17, 2014
great storie:p
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on July 17, 2014
Wow, I wish I could change it to 5 stars, excellent : )
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on March 03, 2013
yeah i dont mean you need to make them longer, just improve them a little, or make more which you're probably doing right now
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on February 23, 2013
i know i have 2 make em short
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on February 23, 2013
take it or leave it Liffey, you're not always gonna get "Oh Liffey! This is perfect! I know a professional
publisher!" so build up your work because your stories are good, but you've written better
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on February 22, 2013
sigh
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on February 22, 2013
you can, liffey, you've left things on my stories that I'll never forgive you for, so just take this and make better ones. I left what I thought, I dont wanna lie and say it's amazing, because they're just good dog stories
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on February 22, 2013
still i dont tell you
YOUR STORIES ARE NOT GOOD AND THEY NEED IMPROVED.
do i?
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on February 22, 2013
i meant :)
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on February 22, 2013
it's constructive criticism, so dont be offended, you take it and improve : )
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on February 22, 2013
the one about the mix breed and tricks.
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on February 22, 2013
and yeah
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on February 22, 2013
And I like the 2nd chapter
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on February 22, 2013
but you said they were not amazing only good and if i improve them they will be great
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on February 22, 2013
I'm not, I added it to my faves, look if you don't believe me
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on February 22, 2013
you are now slagging them
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on February 22, 2013
I like Max best
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on February 22, 2013
okay, it's good, not amazing, improve your stories and they will be great
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on February 22, 2013