Divergent - Amity Initiate

Divergent - Amity Initiate

This is about a girl called Nera (full name Neralia) who is in Dauntless but then chooses Amity. No copyright intended, a section of this is from the actual Divergent book, which is written by Veronica Roth and it is hers to own.

published on May 04, 2014completed

Alena

Alena
"So, look who's back!" Alena sneers, "The little faker!"
"Whoa, back down, sister!" Lucy retorts. It is the first time I've heard her speak. Her voice is strong and firm.
Alena snorts. "Who are you to go around saying things like that?"
"Hey, Amity is a place of PEACE, if you didn't know that!" Sam glares at Alena.
"And there's the little Erudite junkie with her stupid little glasses!" Alena mocks.
"Hey, leave Sam alone!" I yell. Alena doesn't take any notice. She walks slowly towards Sam, like a tiger waiting for the right moment. Sam stands her ground.
"I...am not Erudite anymore." She says, her chin tipped up and her voice shaking.
"Yeah, sure! I believe you!" Alena says sarcastically. Sam bites her lip. "I'll prove it!" she takes of her glasses and, in one quick jerk, snaps them in half.
"See? I am NOT Erudite, but you, you would fit in perfectly with that pig Jeanine Matthews!"
They glare at each other for a full minute. I hold my breath. Then, just like that, they stop and the argument is over. They turn in opposite directions and we follow Sam back into the Ranch in silence.
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AWESOME!!!! I found this book from on of my friends i love it and i find it funny how i published my own divergent book of a transfer to amity seven hours ago if you want i can send you link but only if you want and again AWESOME BOOK!!!
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Okay! sure i'd love to read it :)
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thx! :)
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on May 12, 2015
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on May 12, 2015
This is awesome! A couple of errors (like Dauntless are the only ones who jump off of trains, the bread doesn't actually have that effect unless you're given the straight chemical and too much of it, etc.) but otherwise, AWESOME!!!
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on May 12, 2015
please make more! It's tied my favorite story on qfeast please, please, please, please, PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!
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Thanks!
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on November 27, 2014
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on November 24, 2014
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!
And yep, it's true!
You can't put out a Dauntless flame!
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on June 22, 2014
This is AWESOME!! I love it!:D
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on June 18, 2014
Awesome! You can't put out a dauntless flame! I'm Divergent too! (DO NOT READ THE NEXT PART IT HAS SPOILERS UNLESS YOU READ ALLEGIANT) (Everyone is, you find out in Allegiant that OUR world is Divergent.)
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I havn't read alliegent yet but my sis ruined it for me.,...,curse you sis!!!
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on May 12, 2015
It's fine, this was worth it.
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on June 18, 2014
:) thank u so much! It took such a long time though, so sorry that u had to wait :( :)
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ur New Girl story is WWWWAAAAAYYYYYYY better!! :D
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Okay, but gtg now bye :)
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on June 16, 2014
You MUST write more!!!!
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on June 16, 2014
:D You too!!! :) :) :)
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on June 16, 2014
Aww thanks! You're an awesome writer NeonTiger.
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on June 15, 2014
THIS IS AMAZING, YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!
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:D thanx i will!
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on June 14, 2014
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 03, 2014
Love this!! :D
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on May 05, 2014
PS. post a message on my writing page if you want a character put in ;)
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on May 05, 2014
thanks. I tried to write in the same style that Veronica Roth uses. :"> :)
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on May 04, 2014
I LOVE IT!
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on May 04, 2014
Really good , please write more!
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on May 04, 2014
This story is amazing so far!! :D
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on May 04, 2014
yeah same!
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on May 04, 2014
I love this so far!
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on May 04, 2014
this is good!
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on May 04, 2014