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Forsaken

(Theme: Slow-paced up to Pre-chorus and Chorus)
There are days
Where you wonder
If you'll ever be free....
There are days
Where you just want
To be....
There are days
Where you look up
To the wide blue sky
But for me
Those days have
All gone by
(fast pace, emphasising every syllable):
Ev-ry place I come
Ev-ry place I leave
Ev-ry place I go
I grieve......

PRE-CHORUS
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I FIGHT for survival
In this cruel world
Until
Eeevvvry thing has unfurled
I need a sign
Something to see....
When will I ever be free?

CHORUS
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Abandoned
Exiled
Forasaken
What do I do?
I'm angry, afraid, and shaken
And all I have is you

BRIDGE
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I'm left alone,
Dumped here and stranded
For no reason at all
I was re-pri-man-ded
Into this downfall....

PRE-CHORUS

CHORUS

CODA
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(softly):
Abandoned, Exiled, Forsaken
I'm alone
In my thoughts
I thought I was safe, but as you can see....
Everything happens to me


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