A/N - THAT long?! Wow.
Holy shit how long has it been since I last updated this story? 6 months +?MY GOD!
Yeah, I actually thought you guys didn't like this story, thus why I stopped updating it.
That is, until someone by the name @MerTaylor came along, favourited, praised, and my God, it brought my hopes up!
But going through this story, back then it was okay to me... but now, I noticed a few problems.
1) This story is... one of my earlier stories from when I was kinda new to Qfeast. I always thought my writing then was a bit crappy, and just didn't quite fit.
2) I've now researched more into the Divergent fandom, and I now have full intel on the trilogy. And this story, does NOT fit the trilogy. I do notice that now.
3) I feel like I've rushed this along, like not had a chance to describe anything about Liz, or her past, just dove straight into the story.
So that's why I'm planning to scrap this story, but not.
Yeah, it don't make sense that way, so let me put it more clearer:
I am going to re-write this story in a better way, using the full intel from the Divergent trilogy itself, but it will still be with Liz and her story.
So hopefully that will all work out, and it'll get more noticed. Fingers crossed for that!
Again, sorry to those who liked this version, but I just feel like I could have added more to it.
But rest assured, the re-mastered version is indeed on its way. So you have that to look forward to.
And on that note, I am off to college. Cya!!!
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Omg!
And here I was thinking that other people thought this was crap, cuz it's one of my earlier stories, when my writing style needed some work on.