Human-Hedgehog

Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

published on May 04, 2014not completed

Meet Domanic

Meet Domanic Jackie
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I lock the door to my room and stay in there, crying. That is, until I hear a knock on my door.
"Jackie? You okay? It's Sapphire."
"And Alexis!"
"Can you let us in?" Sapphire asks.
"Okay... I guess," I reply, unlocking the door.
Sapphire and Alexis enter the room, with Alexis closing the door behind her.
"You know, I was like you when I first heard the news," Sapphire tells me. She shows me a picture of her family from 5 years ago, which only brings more tears to my eyes. "It's common to feel how you feel now."
We then hear my window slam shut. I walk over to see who did it, but no one is there.
"Jackie! Behind you!"
I look around and a purple hedgehog has a knife at my throat.
"So you are the famous Jackie, come to save Mobius, huh?" he says. "I am Domanic, the master thief of Mobius."
I look at Alexis who smirks and mutters "Except for Rouge" under her breath.
"Where is Sapphire?" Domanic asks. So I turn to face the door, and I see her.
"Right here," she says, and behind her stand the boys.
"Causing trouble Dom?" Sonic approaches first, followed by the other boys.
And they're all ready for action.

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"You haven't seen the last of me!" Domanic cries as he jumps out the window.
"He's creepy," I say, quivering in fear. "Is he..."
"A guy who works for Eggman? Yep," Sonic replies. "I'm off. I need some fresh air." And at that, he runs out of my room.
"Thanks for telling us, Sapphire," Silver says to Sapphire. "If we didn't know, poor Jackie would be a goner."
The boys all exit and its just me, Sapphire and Alexis.
"Hey Jackie, I think it's time you knew the other girls," Alexis says to me.
"Yeah," Sapphire adds. "We can arrange a sleepover!"
The two go downstairs to prepare this sleepover, so I sit on my bed alone.
Then I hear someone singing.

"We're in the crowd,
We're coming out,
Got my flash on, it's true.
I need a picture of you!"

It sounds familiar.
I look out the window and I see Sonic in the garden. I never knew he had an iPod.
And he's singing the very song my mother taught me when I was young.
It's my favourite song in the world.
Paparazzi.
I rush out to the garden to see him. "Nice song," I tell him.
He takes out his earphones and looks at me. "What song?"
"That song you were singing."
"Oh. Right. That," he says. "You heard it huh?"
"My mother and I always sang it when I was young," I tell him. "I used to be afraid of thunderstorms. Whenever there was one she used to hug me and we would sing that song."
"Nice," he replies. "Hey, you wanna sing with me?"
"I bet I could beat you in a contest," I challenge him.
"Whoa you're feisty! Bring it on then!"
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I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Yeah
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on November 24, 2014
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Yay Jackie!
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Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
Lol, I love conserts
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XD
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Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
I got the emerald. :D
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XD
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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on May 22, 2014
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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on May 10, 2014
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