Human-Hedgehog

Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

published on May 04, 2014not completed

Meet Eggman

Meet Eggman Jackie
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I walk out the front door to get the bus to school. I see Sonic at the window as I sit down. He gives me a thumbs up and I give one to him as the bus sets off. This past month has been so cool! The boys are so kind, but I know it can't last forever. They'll have to go home soon, and I'll be alone again.

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At lunch, I finally get something to eat: Fish and Chips with Mushy Peas, with a side of Coca Cola and a dessert of Chocolate sponge, drenched in a chocolate flavoured custard.
"Jackie, over here!" My friends call me to sit with them, so I do.
"Hey, what's up?" I ask.
"Nothing much," she says, "but word is some weird aliens are living at your house for the past month."
Someone's been spying on my house?!
"That's ridiculous," I reply. "Aliens don't exist."
We giggle, and dig into our lunches.
Suddenly, the left wall is crashed into and a weird hovercraft emerges. Inside it sits a fat man wearing red, with bald hair and a ridiculous moustache.
"Which one of you goes by the name of Jackie?" he bellows. My friends try to hold me back, but I step forward.
"So. You are the legendary Jackie," he says. "I am Dr. Eggman, the greatest scientific genius in all of the world!"
"Dream on fatso," I shout back. "You ain't gonna be a scientist with a body the size of an egg! No wonder you're called Eggman!"
"Jackie, are you okay?" I hear a voice in the distance.
Sonic.
I see him running towards me. "Thank God you're okay!"
"I'm fine, Sonic," I reply.
"I should've known you'd be here, Sonic the Hedgehog," Dr. Eggman says to Sonic.
Sonic points a finger up at Eggman. "You DARE lay a finger on Jackie, and I swear to God, you won't see daylight again, Egghead!"
"I should've killed you when I had the chance, hedgehog," is all Eggman can say.
Sonic picks me up around my legs. "Hold on tight."
I wrap my hand around his neck, and he starts running back home. He's super fast. I feel like I'm on a roller coaster that doesn't go up or down.

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"Eggman crashed into your school?" Tails asks me.
"Yes. He asked for me, then I saw Sonic running towards me," I reply. "He picked me up and then came back here."
"Clearly we're not safe here anymore," Silver adds. "We have to get home soon."
"You guys arrived in that capsule in the park right?" I ask. "It's still there. You can use it to get home."
"You mean we," Sonic replies. "You're coming too Jackie."
I look at him in shock. Me? Going with them?
"What? But..."
"It's okay," Knuckles says. "You're able to come."
"We had a vote about going home today, and majority voted for you to come with us," Tails adds.
"Then we should try find the capsule," I reply. "It's in the park, like I said."
But we don't get to. Because Eggman breaks the garage door open, and snatches me up.
"Got you, Jackie!"
"Get your filthy robot hands OFF me, Eggman," I shout back at him.
He flies up to his machine that hovers in the sky.
I am now his prisoner.
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I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Yeah
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on November 24, 2014
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Yay Jackie!
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Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
Lol, I love conserts
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XD
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Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
I got the emerald. :D
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XD
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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on May 22, 2014
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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on May 10, 2014
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