Human-Hedgehog

Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

published on May 04, 2014not completed

Meeting the girls

Meeting the girls Jackie
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Normally at home, today would be Valentine's Day. But I'm not home. I'm in Mobius. And Valentine's Day is tomorrow in Mobius. So I have to wait another day. To see if anyone developed a crush on me. Though I doubt they have.
I hear a knock at my door. "Hey Jackie, it's Alexis! Breakfast is ready!"
I slowly crawl out of bed. It's never felt so comfortable. So comfortable it reminds me of my mother. The thoughts bring tears to my eyes. But I won't let them show.
After getting dressed, I walk down the stairs, and I see someone.
Who is it?
It's Sapphire. On her phone. She has an iPhone 5!
"Hey Amber! Yeah, I'm fine," she says on the phone. "Listen, the girls and I are having a sleepover at mine."
A sleepover? Sweet! I've always wanted to go to a sleepover!
"Yes, the boys will be there, before you ask..."
Wait... What if I'm not invited?
"And yes, Penny can come too."
Now I'm starting to panic. I can taste bile rising in my throat.
"Oh, and also. There's a new girl coming. I want you to be nice to her. She's not had any friends before."
I'm going to a sleepover! Yes!
"Okay then, Alexis and I will get it ready, see you then!" She hangs up on her phone.
I walk into the kitchen to see Silver making breakfast. The girl are all around the table.
"Hey Jackie," Alexis says. "You're finally up. Silver's made us pancakes for breakfast."
I sit down at the table, as Sapphire soon joins us.
"I think you should meet the girls. This is Amy, Cream, Blaze, Sonia, Cosmo and Rouge."
Each of the girls say hello in their own way. I smile back at them. "Hi."
Sapphire then walks into the living room, and we hear her scream. "WHO BROKE MY VASE?!"
Silver then approaches me, and Knuckles and Sonic are behind him.
"Hey Jackie, it's Valentine's Day tomorrow," Silver says.
I smile, nodding at him. "Yeah, it is. I know."
"You have anyone in mind?" Knuckles asks me. I bite my lip. I don't know who to like, or if they would like me.
Sonic sees me biting my lip, and starts chanting something silly. "Someone's got a cru-ush!"
"Umm... well..." I start.
"Told you she did!" Sonic says. "Come on, who is it?" Now he's right next to me. I end up blushing like mad.
"Jackie!" I hear Sapphire call. "The sleepover's ready!"
I run off, looking back at the guys. "See you later!"

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Sapphire introduces me to Amber and Penny. "Amber, Penny, this is Jackie."
"It's nice to meet you Jackie," Amber says, holding out her hand to me.
"Pleasure to meet you Jackie," Penny adds. She too holds her hand out.
I shake both of their hands. "Nice to meet you."
"Hey, let's have a pillow fight!"
"No. Way," Rouge says. "Last time we had a pillow fight, there were feathers all over my room, and it took me AGES to clear it up! If this thing doesn't hurry up soon then I'm leaving to see Knuckles!"
"I'm starting to think you like Knuckles, Rouge," Sapphire replies, and we all "Ooh!"
"Oh yeah? Well I saw it when you blushed when Domanic touched you!" Rouge challenges. Sapphire's face turns a deep red. Like a Crimson red.
Cosmo then turns to me. "What about you Jackie? Who do you like?"
"Well..." I start, but we hear a crash. We run to the wardrobe only to find Sonic in it.
And with a lot of junk on his head.
"SONIC!" we all yell, surprised.
Alexis carries a purple bag. "Hey Sonic, you know what happens when a boy gets caught at a girl's sleepover?" The girls start giggling as they grab Sonic and drag him to the bathroom.
His eyes are wide open. "LET GO OF ME! YOU'RE NOT GONNA DO THAT AGAIN ARE YOU?!"
But not all the girls went. Cream stayed behind. "Cream, what are they going to do to Sonic?" I ask. But she nods, giggling.

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A few minutes later, the girls walk back in, still giggling. Then I see that Rouge and Alexis are dragging Sonic back in. I take one look at him and fall to the floor laughing.
They put make-up on him!!! He had pink eye shadow, and bright red lipstick, and really strong mascara. Oh my God I couldn't stop laughing!
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I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Yeah
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on November 24, 2014
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Yay Jackie!
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Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
Lol, I love conserts
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XD
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Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
I got the emerald. :D
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XD
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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on May 22, 2014
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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on May 10, 2014
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