Let Me Die

Let Me Die

17-year old Jamie Collsburg is upset about dying, especially after learning she wasn't supposed to die, her brother was. The unexpected arrival of a innocent girl named Arianna proves that Jamie can reset the story, her fate. And switch places with Arianna in the nick of time. But when it actually happens, Jamie finds what it's like to have a family mourning over another sibling--not good. But she knows she's never going back. And Arianna knows she needs to get back, before the whole world is turned off balance with their disappearance.

published on April 05, 2014not completed

New Life, New House (Arianna)

The outline of the dark house freaked Arianna to death.

Why?? Why would this be the kind of house her parents were interested in. It looked more like it had been haunted for years. And the small balcony at the top gave her the chills. "I'm sure you'll love it" Mrs. Philpott showed us the interior of the house, which seemed as it would be the only upgraded room in the whole house. It had a retro look, triangles and splashes of pink and black everywhere. I could barely keep myself from sweating. The heat was WAY too hot.

I took out my phone and texted my best friend Nina. WHAT IS THIS? A JOKE? ~A. I took a quick picture of the inside of the 2nd room, which looked much more haunted than the front. 10 seconds later, Nina replied, as if she had been waiting intensly for a text. LOL I DUNNO. UR PRNTS R CRAZY THO. I ALRDY MISS U ~N. NOT AS MUCH AS I MISS U ~A. The next text took about 5 minutes, and they were just viewing the spacy kitchen. NO UR WRONG. IT'S #HASTAG STUPID PPL. CHECK OUT THE LINK I SENT OVR E-MAIL... ~N. A quick reply to that came onto the tiny Ipod screen. WELL...WHEN U GET TO USE THE CMPTR, LOL ~N. Nina tended to forget that there was actually a fee for using her phone, and thought that extra replies were just as fine as the first text, while I tried to fit everything onto one text.

"Arianna, we bought you a phone as a pity gift for having to leave Gana Joint!! Don't socialize when you don't have to!!" my mom is such a worryrat. And my dad's a neat freak so all the junk that the other owners left in here is going to be in the garbage truck in 2 weeks, pronto!! The only thing I like about them is that they can have some pretty awesome humor when they want to. It pays off at pre-graduate parties.

The best part is, I may or may not be able to go to the Prom at my old school, since I've been there since the beginning of 9th Grade. The only reason I moved here was because of a stupid parent's job. But the way my mom and dad looked at every corner and cranny made me think of it was JUST their job.
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1. There will be romance, and I'm not sure in which particular chapters, but I'm thinking maybe in between her school time and trying to go back to Earth.
2. I can't answer this, as it would be a spoiler, but it is a connection to the story.
3. Of course!! I will make a page where you can post them. I can't make a link to it, so here's a deal. I will get 10 new See More
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on April 07, 2014
This is like, the only story I want to keep reading on here, because you always leave us waiting for more, each chapter. I just have a few questions:
1. Will there be romance, and if so in which chapters??
2. How come Arianna has a suspicion of her parent's job? Is it part of the story or a distraction mystery?
3. Can WE come up with a few of the characters?
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on April 07, 2014
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on April 05, 2014
Good!
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on April 05, 2014
It's a top priority!!
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on April 05, 2014
Love it you should add more
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