Taken Away...

Taken Away...

This is a story about a girl whose father dies and no-body knows how. The girl (her name is Sarah) thinks her stepmother murdered him because of his great fortune. Sarah and her brother Jonathan are whisked of on a nightmare no-one could possibly dream of.(cover is of Dove Cameron and Ryan Mcartan)

published on March 18, 2014not completed

The wedding..

The wedding.. (in this chapter everything starts to go wrong and the nightmare unleashes )                                                                                                               Sarah was upset but kept in mind what Jonathan had said. She awoke by the sound of light knocking at her door. "Jonathan." she said half opening her eyes. "Wake up Sarah it's time to go are you ready yet?!!" Jonathan would shout every few seconds. Finally she pulled herself together and got up, pulled on her specially tailored dress that cost about £5,0000 it was too big and very floppy. "Probably bigger than the brides dress." she muttered as they left the drive of the gigantic Hudson mansion in a white pearl limo. The floors were a mahogany colour topped of with gold lines going through it. The roof was like anyroof of a car that was about 70 years old.

When they arrived, Sarah walked straight into the cathedral with her twin brother Jonathan trailing not too far behind her. They sat down in the row that was marked off saying `Hudson Children: Jonathan and Sarah` Sarah stretched ready for the long three hours ahead. Just then Carther tipped Jonathan on the back. "Come with me my darling" she said in a strange way "I have to show you something..." And Jonathan followed..........

Jonathan followed Carther outside the cathedral to a hall. Carther pinned him up against the wall "Don't get in my way boy, the Hudson fortune will be mine no matter what way I get it" she said her voice booming. "H,HOW!" Jonathan shouted. "how, you're a brave boy aren't you. I'm afraid I'll have to get something out of the way..." she said in a moody yet mysterious tone. "Or somebody." Jonathan said. He didn't mean to say it out loud he just said what he feared but when he said it Carther looked up at him. "You know too much boy! I'll have to take care of you then shan't I."she said In the wink of an eye she threw him in a room and locked the door.......
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thanx so much:)
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on March 21, 2014
God story:)
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on March 21, 2014
hi plz comment!!! i'll post my next chapter on thursdays and tuesdays!!!:">
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on March 19, 2014